Pixel Joint Forum: Just pleasure

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   This picture is showing a football player who overdid it with pleasure.
I tried to make a depth of field, it was my first try about that. 
Perhaps, it looks like the anatomy is strange. I won't make an excuse that's the >comic's style<. I wanted to do it a bit bizzare....

Whad do you think? Is it good/bad?

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Ricki Midshipman Joined: 06 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 52	Topic: Just pleasure Posted: 12 June 2008 at 7:49am
	This picture is showing a football player who overdid it with pleasure. I tried to make a depth of field, it was my first try about that. Perhaps, it looks like the anatomy is strange. I won't make an excuse that's the >comic's style<. I wanted to do it a bit bizzare.... Whad do you think? Is it good/bad?
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Metaru Commander Joined: 28 December 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 12 June 2008 at 9:25am
	currently is bad. the anatomy, >comic style< or not, is lacking proportions. have you used references? if not, i do recommend you to use them. trying to figure anatomy on your own can be a very dangerous quest wich may not always give a good result. as a personal advice, i would refine the player's anatomy first and then move into the background, no need to try to do it all in one single strike.
	I ate leel's babies
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Ricki Midshipman Joined: 06 September 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 52	Posted: 12 June 2008 at 10:42am
	Metaru: No, I didn't use any references, 'cause I wanted to try it on my own sometimes...So I found a picture/photo, which I will do it by....I hope it will be o
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Metaru Commander Joined: 28 December 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3305	Posted: 12 June 2008 at 1:05pm
	do not forget to post it here.
	I ate leel's babies
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