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Setzer
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Quote Setzer Replybullet Topic: goblins and rust
    Posted: 13 June 2008 at 7:28am




i'm really having issues with the perspective, and how to draw in the goblins/interior of the craft, any advice?
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Quote skamocore Replybullet Posted: 13 June 2008 at 8:04am
I think the shape of the balloon is alright at the moment...you might just want to adjust the nipple to the right and maybe a bit down...
and right now the shading on it looks like a really badly colour reduced gradient. I think you need to remove some colours from it and maybe think about texture.

Also, there seems to be a lot of conflicting lightsources.

The goblin needs more definition...from 1x it appears flat...and it's hard to tell what it is exactly

The colour of the grass seems to suggest that it's a misty morning...so maybe try incorporating that more into the image a bit more. ie. adding more mist around the craft.

On a sidenote...the base is looking amazing :D
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 13 June 2008 at 10:07pm
What's stopping you from making the whole blimp?

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