Ok, so I was given the option to make a 128x128 splash logo for the ending credits of a game I did some work on recently, and I came up with this:

It's not really a WIP... though some of the colors and stuff are still a BIT tentative, it's more or less a finished piece.  Good ol' fashioned 15 color + 1.

GOT CRITS? 

 

thanks kids

 

 

 

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thanks.. joey...

 

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please, I'd really like just a few crits.

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Yeah, the colour selection at the moment could use a little improvement.

Also, what's with the gash of white the cuts across the sky? Not sure what that's trying to be. And make the text a little less drab, it looks rather plain as it stands.

And what's in the background... what is the guy looking at?

An a positive note, I like the style. Looks like a scratch-and-win situation

The light green at the bottom doesn't go very well with the grayish, number colours. Try changing that maybe.

it's some floating structure, of some sort.

ok, I'll change up the colors a bit and see what I come up with..

 

I was just about to applaud you for actually calling it a castle.. and then.. yeah.

that was really un called for.

I'm working on figuring out what to do with this piece.

What was the point of that post. Hehe...

Anyway, nice job on this one, but I don't like the green specks on the bottom of the tree. I don't think you should outline the castle, just because It shouldn't stick out much. Also like they all said, the lettering, and the grass...ya

it only looks like that if you're looking for it.

why would you do something like that?

Mmm, nice putting yourself above everyone there, Citizen_Insane. Pixelblink just had the guts to point out something that would have been pointed out eventually. Probably aware that it would get yelled at.

And for your desperate need for crits, I've seen no changes. Where are the updates?

I was talking about this..

sorry I didn't specify.  see?  I'm not perfect.  that's why I asked for some critttz

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Ahh, nice! Thanks for the update, definitely some improvement there. Might wanna work on the text a little more. If I didn't know it said "world" I'd not have figured it out.

The castle's depictable as a castle, the foreground colours are clear and bright... as I said, nice update.

Yea, cool update, it's clear you're going somewhere with this now.

As for further C&C, I'd advise you to spend a little more time on the borders of some areas, namely the clouds and the "frame", Id try to make them a little more delicate.

And my comment up there, well. It's unecessary, I see that, but then it's neither malevolent or insulting, I made the ;) to make that clear. Everyone is in the situation of not knowing how to continue a  piece sometimes, and I was being amicable. Let's just forget about it.

Whats that arrow in the middle of it?

And the text is unreadable, at least my poor eyes cannot see it clearly. Glasses are foggy (read dirty) too.

 

I like the first one. Black ruins the second one. Maybe add just some lighter dark color instead of complete black?

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thanks guys

instead of the black border I might just do something contrasting with the other colors... that usually works.  the letters are still too unreadable.. but I like the direction I'm going with them.

I don't know when I'll have another update, though.. sometime between tomorrow and sunday.