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l3m0n5
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    Posted: 04 August 2008 at 8:25pm
A-hard.
Just to re-work and practice my now super rusty pixel skills.




Edited by l3m0n5 - 04 August 2008 at 8:24pm
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Quote dro man jerr Replybullet Posted: 04 August 2008 at 9:00pm
interesting ideaa
fix the clouds pleaseeee
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Quote Artisan Replybullet Posted: 05 August 2008 at 4:05am
i think the sun could do with improveing, the rest is good, but the sun is wonky and the face is wonky just looks weird.

I like shiny things, i do indeed.
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Quote l3m0n5 Replybullet Posted: 06 August 2008 at 11:10pm
Update: tried to fix the clouds a bit and make the sun look better. :/



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Quote Blu Replybullet Posted: 09 August 2008 at 2:56pm
Clouds look better, possibly a bit like plastic, but fine if you want to keep it. Are those trees on the hills? Why are they all lop-sided?

Edited by BluWriter - 09 August 2008 at 2:56pm
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 09 August 2008 at 4:22pm
Pixelling is good, but the composition isn't doing anything for me.  My eye never really rests upon any certain focal point.
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