Pixel Joint Forum: apartment entry

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   i have been working on this for a bit and cant think of what i can add, 

i know there are other things that could fit in but i cant think what, 

anyone got any sugestions for what i could add? or anything which i 

could improve?

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ok just a small edit here, iv put in some splinters of wood and some 

black shadeing in an effort to make it look more like its comeing out 

the floor. i havnt worked on the vines or anythin yet just thought to 

keep you updated on small steps im doing inbertween other stuff. 

anythin else i can add or make better just say!

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ok iv added a picture and a table to give the effect it was an actual 

room in the 1st place. then i added a blood stain and tried to add 

vines but they didnt turn out well so instead i added a craked texture 

to the bottom of the creature.

Edited by Rifts

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Rifts Commander Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355	Topic: apartment entry Posted: 17 April 2005 at 12:03pm
	i have been working on this for a bit and cant think of what i can add, i know there are other things that could fit in but i cant think what, anyone got any sugestions for what i could add? or anything which i could improve? - edit - ok just a small edit here, iv put in some splinters of wood and some black shadeing in an effort to make it look more like its comeing out the floor. i havnt worked on the vines or anythin yet just thought to keep you updated on small steps im doing inbertween other stuff. anythin else i can add or make better just say! - edit - ok iv added a picture and a table to give the effect it was an actual room in the 1st place. then i added a blood stain and tried to add vines but they didnt turn out well so instead i added a craked texture to the bottom of the creature. Edited by Rifts
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 17 April 2005 at 1:23pm
	Heh, I like this one. I think it would help to have more splintering in the wood as it comes up from the floor -- have some pieces of floorboard angled up. Right now it looks like it is attached the floor and it has kind of an odd look.
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Sibix Commander Joined: 12 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 200	Posted: 17 April 2005 at 1:40pm
	add vines twisting around it :) and the splinter thing.. have someone with a sword cutting a branch off and tree blood squirting out
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greyscar Midshipman Joined: 03 March 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 85	Posted: 18 April 2005 at 4:21am
	yay graphic horror! :P

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Rifts Commander Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355	Posted: 23 April 2005 at 4:19am
	- edit - ok iv added a picture and a table to give the effect it was an actual room in the 1st place. then i added a blood stain and tried to add vines but they didnt turn out well so instead i added a craked texture to the bottom of the creature.
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 23 April 2005 at 12:34pm
	Some good edits here Rifts. Couple of crits... The angle of the painting hanging and the shadow behing looks quite odd. It looks like the painting is facing the viewer. The non-iso perspective would now cause the part of the painting further from us to be smaller.
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 23 April 2005 at 12:46pm
	I think the "shadow" is actually an imprint of where the painting used to hang.
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Rifts Commander Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355	Posted: 23 April 2005 at 4:33pm
	pixel blinks right lol i tried to make it so it looked like the colour of the wall has been faded by sunlight or something and the imprint of the picture is the actual size. but i see what you mean about it seeming as if the picture os no longer isometric, i dont know what i can do but ill have a go at changeing it.
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 25 May 2005 at 9:17pm
	when are you going to finalize and submit this into the gallery so we can put it in The Joint?
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 06 June 2005 at 11:12am
	Gotta back up blink on this... I was strolling through all the half-finished "Joints" and I always loved this one. You gotta finish this one!
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Rifts Commander Joined: 14 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 355	Posted: 06 June 2005 at 11:42am
	lol ill finsih all my joints off 2nite if i can
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