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Dar Kuma
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Quote Dar Kuma Replybullet Topic: WIP 2 works
    Posted: 26 April 2006 at 10:51pm

i was in my gallery and apparently i need to revise 2 works,i think the hotrod might be too dark for some people that might not see the detail but i would like to keep a blackish color theme on that one,not sure what im going to do with the truck though,any ideas for these two

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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 27 April 2006 at 12:42am
Both images are broken.
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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 27 April 2006 at 3:39am
The seccond one needs more contrast and definition.

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Quote Dar Kuma Replybullet Posted: 27 April 2006 at 4:52am

its a pretty dark piece,ill see what i can do with it,thanx monkey

adjusted the settings on this a bit and redid the lighter grey highlights,any better///

the axles are pretty hard to see with this bacground

 



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Quote Blueberry_pie Replybullet Posted: 27 April 2006 at 6:25am
I think these were rejected because they're simply too much alike (both these two and what you submitted already). Putting all of your cars into one image and submitting that might be a better idea.
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Quote Dar Kuma Replybullet Posted: 27 April 2006 at 7:16am
ill just try the hotrod again as it took me a little while longer
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 27 April 2006 at 7:44am
Don't get all riled up Dar. They seem too simple and uncreative. I actually thought the hot rod was your red car after we all flamed it 
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Quote Dar Kuma Replybullet Posted: 27 April 2006 at 7:59am

nahaha,that hotrod took me hours,it might look simple but getting everything lined up and looking good was a nightmare

and no one,but no one flames the hotrod

someone give me an idea of what to make then



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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 29 April 2006 at 12:14pm
Put some of the cars on a road. Make a bigger peice. *shrug*
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Quote Saboteur Replybullet Posted: 29 April 2006 at 1:45pm
Maek teh fiertruck leik transfrom intwo optimus prime. Pl0x.

Uhhhhh. Subtle details in the windshield of the firetruck work, but those in the hot rod are almost impossible to see without zooming in. Plus the hot rod's wheels are dumb looking, or something.
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