Pixel Joint Forum: Frostmourne

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khalozbatsi
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Topic: Frostmourne
Posted: 23 August 2015 at 12:56pm

What do you think?

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Xevil
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Posted: 24 August 2015 at 6:44pm

Its look great and you can clearly tell its frostmourne, but it doesnt look very frosty, it looks like its thawing out, was that your intent?

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dyluck
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Posted: 24 August 2015 at 11:56pm

I like it, but the black outline doesn't work here. I think changing it for darker versions of the tones will help a lot, specially for the blade.

Edited by dyluck - 24 August 2015 at 11:57pm

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khalozbatsi
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Posted: 26 August 2015 at 5:25am

I wanted to make just the base sword, and then add some animated frost/mist effects. Btw, I replaced the black outline, thanks for that suggestion, that makes the sword better I think.

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Strawzzboy64
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Posted: 26 August 2015 at 7:46am

The outline on the grey parts (the blade, and the stuff on the handle) needs to be darker, like the other outlines. Right now the grey parts look "soft" to me.

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Redsuinit
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Posted: 26 August 2015 at 7:58am

Originally posted by khalozbatsi

I wanted to make just the base sword, and then add some animated frost/mist effects. Btw, I replaced the black outline, thanks for that suggestion, that makes the sword better I think.

Avoiding black here is the right decision I feel, but the color still needs to be darker than what you have now I think.

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dyluck
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Posted: 26 August 2015 at 9:09am

Also, the gray tones too neutral, try to add some more blue to them.Sorry I didn't told you before.

Edited by dyluck - 26 August 2015 at 9:13am

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khalozbatsi Seaman Joined: 26 March 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Topic: Frostmourne Posted: 23 August 2015 at 12:56pm
	What do you think?
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Xevil Midshipman Joined: 17 March 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 57	Posted: 24 August 2015 at 6:44pm
	Its look great and you can clearly tell its frostmourne, but it doesnt look very frosty, it looks like its thawing out, was that your intent?
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dyluck Commander Joined: 24 July 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 231	Posted: 24 August 2015 at 11:56pm
	I like it, but the black outline doesn't work here. I think changing it for darker versions of the tones will help a lot, specially for the blade. Edited by dyluck - 24 August 2015 at 11:57pm
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khalozbatsi Seaman Joined: 26 March 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2	Posted: 26 August 2015 at 5:25am
	I wanted to make just the base sword, and then add some animated frost/mist effects. Btw, I replaced the black outline, thanks for that suggestion, that makes the sword better I think.
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Strawzzboy64 Midshipman Joined: 29 January 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 49	Posted: 26 August 2015 at 7:46am
	The outline on the grey parts (the blade, and the stuff on the handle) needs to be darker, like the other outlines. Right now the grey parts look "soft" to me.
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Redsuinit Midshipman Joined: 24 August 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 44	Posted: 26 August 2015 at 7:58am
	*Originally posted by khalozbatsi* I wanted to make just the base sword, and then add some animated frost/mist effects. Btw, I replaced the black outline, thanks for that suggestion, that makes the sword better I think. Avoiding black here is the right decision I feel, but the color still needs to be darker than what you have now I think.
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dyluck Commander Joined: 24 July 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 231	Posted: 26 August 2015 at 9:09am
	Also, the gray tones too neutral, try to add some more blue to them.Sorry I didn't told you before. Edited by dyluck - 26 August 2015 at 9:13am
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Topic: Frostmourne