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Quote Souly Replybullet Topic: Jeremiah the Hero
    Posted: 02 December 2006 at 4:34am
I had to try and begin creating more characters and get away from the hat wearing punk that I always draw.
So I made a hero that had similar features as my friend Jeremiah.

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Final?



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Quote Skull Replybullet Posted: 02 December 2006 at 7:49am
Looks awesome! I love the style and simple colours.
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 03 December 2006 at 5:02am
Alright some small updates.

I started making a moon, wasn't sure if it looked good with the peice.


Tried making a background for this.
It was a little weird.

Did a bit of editing to the right arm for lightsource, but I don't know if it fixed anything or not.
Also edited the abs a bit.

Decided he needed some sort of crotch bulge.
I also removed the dark brown I had, instead made the hair black.

Good or Bad update?

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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 03 December 2006 at 4:52pm
I don't like the white in the background personally. I feel like it detracts from the foreground in the new one.

In the first one, it was on the side, not behind so it balanced it out.

Edited by Aleiav - 03 December 2006 at 4:53pm
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 03 December 2006 at 4:55pm
Me too. I like the white around the guy, kinda like a glow, but not elsewhere.
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 03 December 2006 at 9:52pm
Some updates.



I edited a few minor things such as...
- Worked on the moon.
- AA'd the head a bit better.
- Added buildings.



I tried to remove the lines, and it just didn't have the same feel that I was going for.


Edited by Souly - 03 December 2006 at 9:58pm

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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 04 December 2006 at 1:17am


Most updated one.

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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 04 December 2006 at 3:02pm
The only reason I'm triple posting is because I think this may be the final update.


I'm happy with it at the moment.
But if anyone has any crits, I'll try to see what I can do. :B

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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 04 December 2006 at 10:01pm
I definetly like this one. :) Excellent. I want to see different representations of the chraracter. Looks very interesting. :)
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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 04 December 2006 at 10:15pm
Nice use of ORANGE.....hmmm it tastes like summer evening. :)
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 04 December 2006 at 10:39pm
Looks great now :D
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Quote Pixel_Outlaw Replybullet Posted: 04 December 2006 at 10:51pm
The shading on the houses is opposite of the moonlight....
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