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madartiststan
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Joined: 21 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5 |
   Topic: Second Figher SpritePosted: 03 June 2007 at 1:18am |
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So, my first fighter sprite was pretty much a hazard and it made people's eyes fall out. I'll probably remove it from my gallery later. But at the moment I've been trying to create a worthwhile and proper fighting sprite (something decent at least
 ).And here's to where I've gotten SO FAR:  It's definitely a lax pose. |
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madartiststan
Seaman
Joined: 21 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5 |
Posted: 03 June 2007 at 3:47pm |
 Leaving me all alone fellas? :[ No crits? |
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Di0xygen
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Joined: 03 July 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 401 |
Posted: 03 June 2007 at 4:22pm |
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Not bad,, i like the arms, the one closest to us would need work on the bicep, the hands do need a lot of work but we all know how hard hands are to make.
The trouser's folds, need a lots of work, its a bit unrealistic how the folds fall. Oh and please grab an anatomy book and fix the 6 pack, a muscular man has to have a nice pack :P ITS MANDATORY :P |
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Ensellitis
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Joined: 19 June 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10099 |
Posted: 03 June 2007 at 4:28pm |
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you need to be patient... a few hours is not the time to start panicking about a lack of crits, they do come
anywho, i think you also need to round out the shading, its too jagged right now. example:  |
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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madartiststan
Seaman
Joined: 21 February 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5 |
Posted: 03 June 2007 at 5:00pm |
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Ensellitis: Thank you very much for the reference and I know see what you mean in terms of smoothing out the shading.
Di0xygen: Thanks much, as for the stomach. I know it's anatomically very incorrect. I was sort of just playing around with it. Not really sure what I want to do there. |
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