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Quote WhyMe Replybullet Topic: Highly Customizable Rifle
    Posted: 21 June 2007 at 11:25am

Hi all,

I don't  quite understand why this pixel art was refused...
 
 
I'll be grateful for any advice.
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Quote ceddo Replybullet Posted: 21 June 2007 at 11:47am


Took off the transparency. People are picky about white backgrounds (for good reason), and it might be why it was refused. The rest looks good though!
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Quote WhyMe Replybullet Posted: 21 June 2007 at 11:57am
Thanks, I'll keep it in mind.
Anything else?
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Quote Christopher Replybullet Posted: 21 June 2007 at 11:59am
Should be good, the clip for the shotgun needs something changed around.
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 21 June 2007 at 12:32pm
I'd take off the black outlining on the silver parts and make it a darker grey instead.
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Quote WhyMe Replybullet Posted: 21 June 2007 at 4:22pm
 
      
 
Is this "base model" better?
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 22 June 2007 at 5:01am
I think it looks better. How about some brighter highlights on the silver, since it is metal? Like a very bright grey.
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Quote WhyMe Replybullet Posted: 22 June 2007 at 10:08am
Thanks everybody, I'll try to submit it one more time.
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 22 June 2007 at 10:12am

you should reconsider the clip of the shotgun model.
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Quote WhyMe Replybullet Posted: 22 June 2007 at 3:27pm

I did it already :)



Edited by k_e_t_t_e_l - 22 June 2007 at 3:27pm
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 22 June 2007 at 4:02pm
I think they're cool. :)
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