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Platnium
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Joined: 27 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 319 |
![]() Topic: W.I.P Man with no ears!Posted: 19 September 2007 at 11:18am |
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Hear he is.
![]() Do you think i should add ears or not.
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Larwick
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![]() Posted: 19 September 2007 at 11:20am |
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Yes you should add ears, unless it becomes the main feature (or lack of) for your character. At the moment it just looks like you forgot.
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spartan_117
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![]() Posted: 19 September 2007 at 11:22am |
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the guy already looks like a zombie. forget the ears make him green and make him bleed.
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Platnium
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Joined: 27 June 2007 Online Status: Offline Posts: 319 |
![]() Posted: 19 September 2007 at 11:45am |
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OK, hows this made him look like an elf:
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 19 September 2007 at 11:55am |
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Update:
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Hapiel
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![]() Posted: 19 September 2007 at 11:58am |
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I dont know how your ears look like, but mine start just under my eyes, highest pint is eyes, lowest point is nose, they end just above nose...
and the tops are more round.. Edited by Lollige - 19 September 2007 at 11:58am |
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 19 September 2007 at 12:14pm |
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OK, hows this:
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jalonso
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![]() Posted: 19 September 2007 at 1:45pm |
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Your first nose was correct basically, he update is not. Look in a mirror and try to place everything in scale following human proportions. Try doing this before coloring.
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leel
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![]() Posted: 19 September 2007 at 4:16pm |
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the best thing to really outline in a nose is the nostrils, the sides should be smooth and you should use shading to show that it's .. what's the word.. a bump? heh, yeah.. good luck.
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 20 September 2007 at 8:33am |
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OK, have not done the nose but hows this look, i will get going on the nose now.
![]() Edited by Platnium - 20 September 2007 at 8:33am |
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Metaru
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![]() Posted: 20 September 2007 at 9:22am |
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please, take a look at this and read it carefully.
Edited by Metaru - 20 September 2007 at 9:22am |
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I ate leel's babies
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 21 September 2007 at 11:10am |
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ok, hows this have not done the ears yet.
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jalonso
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![]() Posted: 21 September 2007 at 1:18pm |
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I can't right now cuz I'm at work. I will however make an edit/redraw that will perhaps help you along in improving depth. I'll do this over the weekend, k ; )
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 22 September 2007 at 1:03am |
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ok,thanks i cant seem to do the nose right.
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spartan_117
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![]() Posted: 22 September 2007 at 3:31am |
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try this tutorial .just read through it has lots of anatomy tips including a few pages on faces. You might find what you are looking for.
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 22 September 2007 at 3:56am |
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Ok,thanks will look now.
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 22 September 2007 at 11:29am |
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I made the nose a bit smaller and changes the ears and hair a bit anything else you think i should do?
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spartan_117
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![]() Posted: 22 September 2007 at 1:23pm |
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did u take a look at the tutorial. The nose doesn't look like a conical flask. and your lightsource isnt in a nice place. try to make it look like sun light. upwards facing him the light source makes him look like a cylinder. if you want to use the current location of the light source it would be effective when the head is in the dark and you just color half of the face (almost).
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Metaru
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![]() Posted: 22 September 2007 at 3:44pm |
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Strike one. Edited by Metaru - 22 September 2007 at 3:44pm |
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I ate leel's babies
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jalonso
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![]() Posted: 22 September 2007 at 6:02pm |
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The ref just shown to you in the chatterbox is more than you'll need or I can make. Study it!!!!
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 1:43am |
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could'nt read that sorry, internet kept disconnecting how's this:
I just hope my internet does'nt disconnect again.
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FrostPumpkin
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 2:44am |
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edit ?
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spartan_117
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 2:54am |
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 2:58am |
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Thanks i can see what you done with the cheek bone and around the eyes.
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 3:07am |
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How's this?
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spartan_117
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 3:11am |
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yes, now work on the hair, it looks plastic
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 3:18am |
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I see, i will add some "frizz" to it see what you think.
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 4:19am |
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How's this:
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 8:28am |
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Any one, if not i will submit it, i am giving you an hour.
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leel
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 8:29am |
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Do more. Work on the face more, Spartan is wrong in telling you to move on - a slight curve in the shadow, while a step in the right direction is not nearly enough to create depth and form. Again. Study study study the edits. Look at the way they use solid colors, the shapes created by the highlights, the shadows, the colors.
There's just no other way to put it - study. Look at different faces and really look at the shapes. Faces are not balloons. They are not flat. Note the changes around the eyes, the shades and highlights on the nose and cheeks. Look at LIPS, and chins.. so far your piece has neither. Just.. study it. Really look at shapes and forms. Edit: P.S. It's incredibly rude to give people who are trying to help you a time limit on giving you help. Edited by leel - 23 September 2007 at 8:30am |
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 8:32am |
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I see, i know what i need to do, i gonna do a chin and lips and i will move the mouth up abit coz i dont think it will fit.
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Blueberry_pie
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 8:33am |
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Originally posted by Platnium i am giving you an hour. Is that a threat? |
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PixelSnader
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 8:55am |
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no it means he donates an hour of his life to everyone reading this thread |
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 8:55am |
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Yes i want the money in the bag or everyone dies no excuses,oh and i can't seem to do the lip's any one know some tutorials......I've been looking for twenty minutes and tried with colors any one know how?
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jalonso
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 8:58am |
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Originally posted by Platnium Any one, if not i will submit it, i am giving you an hour. The standard PJ response time is 24 hours for any comment. You often get lucky and c+c is faster. Please do not do that again. Submitting does not mean adding to the gallery. |
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Platnium
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 9:03am |
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Ok, sorry :(. I'm still having trouble with the lips but i think i nearly got it.
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Metaru
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![]() Posted: 23 September 2007 at 5:33pm |
How To Draw Faces
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I ate leel's babies
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l3m0n5
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![]() Posted: 26 September 2007 at 8:56am |
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if that isn't the best c & c ive seen, i dont know WHAT is...now study son, study like u aint nevah studied before
Oh and i would look at the texture of real hair and not just use a gradient style coloring technique to color in the hair because although its not as bad as pillow shading, its not realistic either...
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