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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Topic: Pixelation avatar
    Posted: 12 November 2007 at 9:25am
I allways wanted to have a pixelation portrait avatar :)

I started working on the challenge, and after I had made my idea I tought, why dont I read the rules twice this time!
I figured out animation was not allowed..
my idea was to create a pixelation avatar, and then let it flash into some fantasy creature self portrait and some other things.. But since im very proud of what I have done allready, I want to continue, and maybe ill get some other idea to combine this or something else with a fantasy portrait :)

-So this is NOT for challenge now!-


hmmm


Wat u thnk o mi AA sklillzorssss??

oh its a jpg.. sorry guys..




Thats what we are talking about :)
Please tell me what you have to say about it, edit it, its all allowed!

Oh btw the way im working is like this (No tracing!!)






Edited by Lollige - 25 November 2007 at 2:06am
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Quote Platnium Replybullet Posted: 12 November 2007 at 9:40am
looks cool i once tried to work with a grid like that i think it works good.
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Quote skeddles Replybullet Posted: 12 November 2007 at 9:42am
pay more attention to the shapes, like the chin for example. It goes more in, and at the end is more square. Lips are too big too.


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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 12 November 2007 at 10:39am
I though you were a girl...
 
 
 
 
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 12 November 2007 at 10:40am
Originally posted by skeddles

pay more attention to the shapes, like the chin for example. It goes more in, and at the end is more square. Lips are too big too.


Lips are still bad, ill update them later. what do you think of the chin now?


EDIT:
Omg metaru, thats soooooo old!


Edited by Lollige - 12 November 2007 at 10:53am
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Quote Hatch Replybullet Posted: 12 November 2007 at 10:49am
Your chin should be about as wide as your lips according to your ref.

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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 12 November 2007 at 10:56am
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Your chin should be about as wide as your lips according to your ref.

Thats usefull information!

I made the lips less wide and the chin wider. I think thats ok now!
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Quote Hatch Replybullet Posted: 12 November 2007 at 10:58am
I'd have gone the other way; widening the chin. You look a bit like you're puckering now. You have a very distinct square chin and I just don't see it in this portrait.

(sorry if my replies are terse; I'm at work)
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 12 November 2007 at 11:08am
Originally posted by Hatch

I'd have gone the other way; widening the chin. You look a bit like you're puckering now. You have a very distinct square chin and I just don't see it in this portrait.

(sorry if my replies are terse; I'm at work)

Than you should be (helping me) working!

I never realized I had such a wide chin!

Wow it starts to look like me!



Edited by Lollige - 12 November 2007 at 11:57am
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 12 November 2007 at 12:16pm

supermegasnaderspeedshadingandlikenessedit!

i made you look like johnny depp, lols. a bit too skinny perhaps

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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 12 November 2007 at 12:22pm
Originally posted by snader

supermegasnaderspeedshadingandlikenessedit!

i made you look like johnny depp, lols. a bit too skinny perhaps

wow...
Its awesome.. but its unhuman :p.. and so unlollige too :p
But there are alot of usefull things in it! Thanks alot talentedartistsupermegasnader!!

EDIT:
is this better?



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Quote Hatch Replybullet Posted: 12 November 2007 at 4:53pm
1) I think the bridge of your nose needs to extend by 1 px

2) Your cheeks look too fat (you have a well-defined jaw judging from the ref)

3) I think your lips are shaped oddly, like they need to be more turned down at the corners.

4) You chin maybe should come up 1 px (not sure about this)


Diggin' it so far
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 14 November 2007 at 8:57am

Huge improvement isnt it?
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Quote Platnium Replybullet Posted: 14 November 2007 at 9:26am
I think the nose needs to be more defined.
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 14 November 2007 at 10:35am
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editted your lips and nose. now you look less gay.

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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 14 November 2007 at 11:10am
Originally posted by Metaru

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 now you look less gay.

and waay older!!
hmm.. I think my version of my nose looks more like my nose :p but im surely going to do something with those lips!
Thanks

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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 15 November 2007 at 11:36am
Its getting better and better every time!
This time its soo good, I made me smile to celebrate!

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Quote l3m0n5 Replybullet Posted: 15 November 2007 at 5:43pm
this may just be me and my bad critiqing skills but the hairline seems to be recending or just a tad high in relation to the size of your forehead...i may be wrong...
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 16 November 2007 at 12:34pm
Lemon, do you think this is better?




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Quote l3m0n5 Replybullet Posted: 16 November 2007 at 12:47pm
perfect, by my standards of hairline efficiency :D
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Quote Varock Shade Replybullet Posted: 16 November 2007 at 12:56pm
Id suggest you make the neck less wide at the lower part.. it should be more straight... (I looked at other pixelation avvies for mine, might work for you as well)... i would also change the "adamsappel" (couldn't find the english word, but you know what i mean i guess?) 

also, you might want to make the hair a bit less smooth beneith/behind the ears... The eyebrows could also be a little less like a bow, cause i see its a bit more flat instead of round on the inner sides (at the nose).

It doesn't look completely like you... but i had the same problem... i always found it hard making faces right from the front, and the size is quite small to achive a finish that looks like yourself. Nice job tho, keep it up... 




Edited by Varock Shade - 16 November 2007 at 1:05pm
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 16 November 2007 at 1:23pm
Thanks for your comment varock!
Ill see if I can make an update for those things you noted later, but not this weekend, I cant work on it then..

This evening I started working on fase 2.. Its the way I allways look in any game, and on the other 'selfportraits' I made...

Red cap, Green more squary glasses, and a yellow sweater (just as the photo shows, I look alot like this in real :p.. but my green glasses are too small for me.. but they looked better than those...)

IT COMPLETELY SUCKS!
Ok I did not spend much time on it yet.. but id really like to see a simple edit of how I have to do this!! I searched for referrences on people with caps on their head but they are hard to find


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Quote l3m0n5 Replybullet Posted: 16 November 2007 at 1:36pm
it depends what kind of cap ur talking about, if u mean those gangster caps or those caps curved at the rim?
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 16 November 2007 at 1:42pm
Originally posted by l3m0n5

it depends what kind of cap ur talking about, if u mean those gangster caps or those caps curved at the rim?

http://mondial.intermix2.nl/images_items/picture_1/500x500/581/581-48Ga.jpg

I had a cap like this.. there was printed LOLSOFT on it very huge.. I could not find it.. I searched it to use it as referrence :(
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Quote herbert_west Replybullet Posted: 18 November 2007 at 11:23pm
Two words: Trucker Hat. (brought to you by Ashton Kucher, a subsidiary of Viacom) 
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 19 November 2007 at 1:37am
This time a non rushed version..
Also I have darkened the lips, also in the origional version tell me if you like them.


EDIT:


EDIT2:
hmm.. those glasses where hard.. I had to change eyebrows, they looked very weird.. but does it still look like me now? and does it matter? after all thisone does not have to look like me...
However its still far from finished..



Edited by Lollige - 19 November 2007 at 8:22am
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 22 November 2007 at 9:16am
Im not sure if its getting better or worse..

EDIT:
now its really getting better again:




Edited by Lollige - 23 November 2007 at 7:14am
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 25 November 2007 at 2:06am

Final image for this version.. now im going to continue with fase 2
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Quote surt Replybullet Posted: 25 November 2007 at 2:16am
Looking good.
Glasses lenses blend into the skin though. Maybe some highlight on the bottom edge (even if not realistic) might help.
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Quote Pridack Replybullet Posted: 25 November 2007 at 3:30am
What program are you using Lollige? It looks good, i would like to use it too.
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 25 November 2007 at 4:49am
very unrealistic..
EDIT: oops wrong image..
This is the right one:



@Pridac:
This time I work with Graphicsgale.. but thats only because I wanted to use layers for hair and background... normally im working with paint (however im slowly moving over to graphics gale totally..


Edited by Lollige - 25 November 2007 at 4:50am
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 09 December 2007 at 7:24am
New one.. No crits on face anymore please, from now on only on cap and glasses and yellow sweater when im done with that too..


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