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Fenne
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Quote Fenne Replybullet Topic: Sprite + tiles [Need C&C]
    Posted: 13 February 2008 at 12:04pm
Hi again :)
 
I'm working on some tiles and a sprite, it's just fr practising, I don't think I'm gonna do something with it, but who knows...
 
Oh well, I wanted to insert an image, and now is the acces denied...
Why o why?
 
Then, I will upload them with imageshack. I hope that'll work.
 
Grass tile;
 
Dirt tile;
 
Sprite;
 
 
C&C pls :d


Edited by Fenne - 13 February 2008 at 12:06pm
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Quote Sonic_Reaper Replybullet Posted: 13 February 2008 at 6:34pm
Well if you're serious about this, for starters, you need more contrast.  Take the darkest two colors you have in each image and make them much, much darker.  I'll guarantee you they'll instantly look 10x better.

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Quote Fenne Replybullet Posted: 14 February 2008 at 10:04am
Okay, I understand.
 
Is this better? Or is the grass tile too dark now?
I also changed te outlines of the sprite... But which of those three is the best?
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Quote Hatch Replybullet Posted: 14 February 2008 at 10:21am
I thought the contrast in the grass and dirt was fine, personally. You don't want a lot of contrast in a ground tile.
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Quote Inventrix Replybullet Posted: 14 February 2008 at 11:13am
The sprite's eyes are frighteningly close together.
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Quote Tillimann Replybullet Posted: 14 February 2008 at 11:26am
I practised a bit with your graphics and here are the results. Maybe it can help you. Feel free to use it, I mean, finally these are your graphics.

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Quote BlackDragon Replybullet Posted: 14 February 2008 at 1:51pm
Tillmann, edits are for reference only. We do not encourage working off of edits done by another member. 
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Quote Tillimann Replybullet Posted: 14 February 2008 at 2:07pm
Even if the member says that it's okay? If the answer is still yes I am sorry, I did not know and I won't say it anymore.


By the way: You forgot an 'i'.


Edited by Tillimann - 14 February 2008 at 3:39pm
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