Pixel Joint Forum: New Artist Help

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Holiday
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Joined: 13 October 2008
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Topic: New Artist Help
Posted: 13 October 2008 at 10:23am

Hello I am new to pixel art and i need some of you to rate my work

Reminder: When you look at my work remember that i am a beginner and did this from scratch this is my first work ever:

I call it the wood-Line furniture:

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greenraven
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Posted: 13 October 2008 at 11:18am

Welcome to PJ.

You really should post this in the WIP forums instead of collabs. It's ok, you're new, these things happen.

There's a stray pixel between the computer and the chair on the right. Could use a bit more details, but otherwise it's good for a beginner.

"pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso

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Holiday
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Posted: 13 October 2008 at 1:18pm

is stray pixel a good thing? or bad?

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greenraven
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Posted: 13 October 2008 at 1:23pm

Bad. It means it's not supposed to be there. That's why it's called a "stray." XD

"pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso

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Holiday
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Posted: 13 October 2008 at 2:20pm

besides the stray how can i make this better?

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greenraven
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Posted: 13 October 2008 at 2:31pm

Hmm... well, there is no such thing as "better" in art. It's all relative to your style and imagination.

But start by fixing these instabilities...

"pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso

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Hapiel
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Posted: 13 October 2008 at 2:52pm

Here is are some tips from mine:

Also, this is an tutorial made by me ages ago. I do not agree with it any more for a big part, still I think its useful for you:

http://lollige.deviantart.com/art/Isometric-shading-tutorial-59702334

EDIT:
oh man green, you are way to fast!

Edited by Lollige - 13 October 2008 at 2:52pm

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Holiday Seaman Joined: 13 October 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Topic: New Artist Help Posted: 13 October 2008 at 10:23am
	Hello I am new to pixel art and i need some of you to rate my work Reminder: When you look at my work remember that i am a beginner and did this from scratch this is my first work ever: I call it the wood-Line furniture:
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greenraven Commander Joined: 08 September 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2598	Posted: 13 October 2008 at 11:18am
	Welcome to PJ. You really should post this in the WIP forums instead of collabs. It's ok, you're new, these things happen. There's a stray pixel between the computer and the chair on the right. Could use a bit more details, but otherwise it's good for a beginner.
	"pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso
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Holiday Seaman Joined: 13 October 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 13 October 2008 at 1:18pm
	is stray pixel a good thing? or bad?
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greenraven Commander Joined: 08 September 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2598	Posted: 13 October 2008 at 1:23pm
	Bad. It means it's not supposed to be there. That's why it's called a "stray." XD
	"pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso
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Holiday Seaman Joined: 13 October 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3	Posted: 13 October 2008 at 2:20pm
	besides the stray how can i make this better?
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greenraven Commander Joined: 08 September 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2598	Posted: 13 October 2008 at 2:31pm
	Hmm... well, there is no such thing as "better" in art. It's all relative to your style and imagination. But start by fixing these instabilities...
	"pwnage comes with patience, practice and planning." ~ Jalonso
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 30 June 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3266	Posted: 13 October 2008 at 2:52pm
	Here is are some tips from mine: Also, this is an tutorial made by me ages ago. I do not agree with it any more for a big part, still I think its useful for you: http://lollige.deviantart.com/art/Isometric-shading-tutorial-59702334 EDIT: oh man green, you are way to fast! Edited by Lollige - 13 October 2008 at 2:52pm
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