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Slemsvamp.
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Joined: 08 December 2008 Online Status: Offline Posts: 70 |
   Topic: Cock a doodle do! [UPDATE]Posted: 01 January 2009 at 10:27pm |
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Before he get's coloured and dithered, I'd like to hear from you guys about colours and/or something else you might have in mind you want to contribute with?
      Latest edit (Nr 8) The biggest issue here is what the heck I'll do with the neck, keep making layers of feathers? Suggestions! Thanks!! Edited by Slemsvamp. - 02 January 2009 at 10:40pm |
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jalonso
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Posted: 01 January 2009 at 11:47pm |
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• Birds and birdlike creatures always have 3 talons not 2, I almost sure :/
• The upper legs don't seem to match too well, perspective wise, maybe its the lower leg, hehe. Anyhoo there is something wrong there. • It may be cool when colored, but keep an eye out when coloring that the wing and beak don't appear as 'side view' as the lineart shows. The tail and talons/feet are at an angle. • Very nice creature :) |
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Slemsvamp.
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Posted: 02 January 2009 at 10:54am |
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Thx Jal, but now I've been entangled and thrown into a corner. I'm lost! I don't know what the heck I'm doing, need PJ pros to help me out here, thanks you guys!
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jalonso
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Posted: 02 January 2009 at 7:47pm |
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Oh noes, me thinks, talons come out the back of the 2 toes, not 3 up front.
Its looking great tho. The colors may be a bit boring, maybe. The eye is lit from a different 'line' than the bird itself. Keep an eye on details like that. |
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Slemsvamp.
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Posted: 02 January 2009 at 10:45pm |
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But.. but, crap! I thought I knew what talons of a bird looked like, but now when u mention it.. true!
And I carefully picked these colours maan, mabye I can eaven it out with some interesting colour of it's neck... I have absolutely no idea what I'm talking about. Any suggestions, or is it still mabye a bit boring? The neck is the biggest issue atm, you know what to do, I do not! The talons will be fixed, hold on! Thanks a lot, really! Edited by Slemsvamp. - 02 January 2009 at 10:45pm |
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kwigbo
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Posted: 03 January 2009 at 9:40pm |
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I like the white on the neck maybe just use a little grey to show some feathers on it instead of just flat white. Looks great, I am anxious to see how this turns out.
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Slemsvamp.
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Posted: 04 January 2009 at 10:11am |
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I'ts not going to be flat, but I'm having trouble making it feathery.
I'll finish it today or tomorrow, thanks a lot! Edited by Slemsvamp. - 04 January 2009 at 10:11am |
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Slemsvamp.
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Posted: 06 January 2009 at 12:59am |
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Crap, I can't get the neck feathers to reach the same standard as the rest. Pro, please help a Joe
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kwigbo
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Posted: 06 January 2009 at 9:18am |
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Well I am no pro but I took a go. I did a quick edit. This is kinda what I had in mind. I attached my reference as well. Hope it helps.
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Slemsvamp.
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Posted: 06 January 2009 at 2:24pm |
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Jeez, you made it, great! I'll post it as fast as can, tyvm! Really, thanks!
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