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vierbit
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Joined: 31 October 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 44 |
![]() Posted: 03 February 2020 at 8:12am |
![]() ![]() Finished #64. |
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gawrone
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Joined: 20 June 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 516 |
![]() Posted: 04 February 2020 at 12:07am |
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Vierbit, the space-snake-catfish -monster is sweet. Is it your design, or is it inspired on something I'm not familiar with?
EDIT: Kinda Dark Souls primordial serpent but better.
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Gecimen
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Joined: 17 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3856 |
![]() Posted: 04 February 2020 at 2:58am |
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Beautiful. I love how it's squeezed to fit in the tile but doesn't look misshaped at all.
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vierbit
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Joined: 31 October 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 44 |
![]() Posted: 04 February 2020 at 1:51pm |
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@gawrone
yeah, I just came up with design while drawing it. Although it's not super unique, so there is probably something similar out there. |
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Minord
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Joined: 02 June 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
![]() Posted: 07 February 2020 at 7:42am |
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Hey, a long time that i not pass here, but i only here for show you something about my tiles. break the neighbour rule.
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Gecimen
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Joined: 17 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3856 |
![]() Posted: 08 February 2020 at 12:53pm |
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Haha nice one Minord :)
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vierbit
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Joined: 31 October 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 44 |
![]() Posted: 09 February 2020 at 4:26am |
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I'll take #62.
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CuriousBeefJerky
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Joined: 23 April 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 132 |
![]() Posted: 11 February 2020 at 5:16pm |
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Thank you Geci and Gawrone! I'm in awe of the scales, shine, and readability of your creature vierbit. Finished with 85. Meant to upload this earlier, but got sidetracked. I dunno if I'm entirely happy with this one, but happy enough unless anyone has any recommendations for it. ![]() I'll try to be back to pick up another tile soon.
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Gecimen
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Joined: 17 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3856 |
![]() Posted: 12 February 2020 at 6:00am |
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Surely!
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gawrone
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Joined: 20 June 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 516 |
![]() Posted: 13 February 2020 at 1:09am |
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@Curious, you've made the ancient-civilisation-aliens-area much more out of this world, than I imagined it could be.
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Irenaart
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Joined: 13 May 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 457 |
![]() Posted: 16 February 2020 at 5:56am |
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I'm FINALLY done with #95. I apologize for such a delay, but I had to steal some time from my daily commitments to finish it. ![]() |
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Esven
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Joined: 01 May 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 113 |
![]() Posted: 16 February 2020 at 8:35am |
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Absolutely incredible work.
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Gecimen
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Joined: 17 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3856 |
![]() Posted: 16 February 2020 at 1:09pm |
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This is just beautiful Irenaart, was worth the wait :)
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gawrone
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Joined: 20 June 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 516 |
![]() Posted: 17 February 2020 at 12:38am |
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You don't have to apologize for anything. But I do apologize that I can't find words to describe how good your tile is.
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Irenaart
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Joined: 13 May 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 457 |
![]() Posted: 17 February 2020 at 2:08am |
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Thank you, guys! That's very nice of you.
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Amazonite
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Joined: 28 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
![]() Posted: 17 February 2020 at 2:24pm |
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Could I have number 10?
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Gecimen
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![]() Posted: 17 February 2020 at 11:34pm |
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Originally posted by Amazonite Could I have number 10? Of course!
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Amazonite
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Joined: 28 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
![]() Posted: 18 February 2020 at 12:14am |
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Thank you Gecimen I have a really cool idea with my tile. I'm thinking of creating a tentacle like the ones I see to the left of my tile and making it wrap around an identical alien to the one in my north neighboring tile. Because they are shooting at my tile, so I will try to make it look like they are trying to kill the tentacle to free their friend. What do you think of that idea? |
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Gecimen
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![]() Posted: 18 February 2020 at 10:16am |
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@Amazonite; sounds really cool :)
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Amazonite
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Joined: 28 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
![]() Posted: 18 February 2020 at 10:55pm |
![]() This is my work in progress. I've been working on this for a couple of hours now. I just want some feedback and critique on how I blended in my tile with the rest of the tiles around me. ![]() |
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Gecimen
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Joined: 17 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3856 |
![]() Posted: 19 February 2020 at 2:44am |
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The grass is a bit too random but apart from that everything seems ok.
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gawrone
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Joined: 20 June 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 516 |
![]() Posted: 19 February 2020 at 4:30am |
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I think it could make more sense if you tried to make the last leg on that side of the river look more similar to one of the last two on the other side, instead of the legs on your side. The futher away from the full monster, the legs should start from lower position, becasue the monster is getting more and more flat to the point of being normal water surface (it is emerging from the river). For example, make the angle much wider (leg reaching futher).
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Amazonite
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Joined: 28 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
![]() Posted: 19 February 2020 at 4:41am |
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Thanks guys, You're the best! I'll work on those. :)
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Amazonite
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Joined: 28 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
![]() Posted: 19 February 2020 at 6:04am |
![]() Is this more like what you guys had in mind? ![]() |
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Amazonite
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Joined: 28 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
![]() Posted: 20 February 2020 at 5:30am |
![]() Hi, sorry to bother everybody again. Could I have a critique on this. What I should add, remove or change. I want to make it as nice as possible before submitting. ^^ ![]() |
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gawrone
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![]() Posted: 20 February 2020 at 9:17am |
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Generally its good. I could find only few things : 1) I would say that you could try to make the tentacle shape more smooth and less angular. It almost look like build only with vertical and 45deg lines. Also two parallel verticals doesn't help to maintain it's organic smoothness. If you make the base of the tentacle wider it will be easier to add more variety to the curves and create an effect of the tentacle getting smoothly thinner towards it's tip. 2) the alien head could use outline on the left - where connects with the tentacle. Becasue it melts together, and it will bring it to the front, and becasue there should be a shade on this side of the alien's head. 3) Add s bit of variety on the horizontal part of thel tentacle that is holding the alien. Those three parallel shades gives it a look of a hexagonal shape - like a pencil. 4) The small alien "legs", which are hanging losely could benefit from slight variation, maybe at least one or two in different position than just straight. Otherwise it look like a pan flute.
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Amazonite
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Joined: 28 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
![]() Posted: 20 February 2020 at 7:58pm |
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Hey, I just got home from work. Thank you for the feedback. I will fix it up
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Amazonite
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Joined: 28 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
![]() Posted: 20 February 2020 at 9:59pm |
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Here is my final edit. I made all of the changes that Gawrone suggested plus cleaned it up a bit. I hope you like it! ![]() |
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gawrone
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![]() Posted: 21 February 2020 at 12:07am |
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I love it!
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Amazonite
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Joined: 28 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
![]() Posted: 21 February 2020 at 12:48am |
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Thank you for your help Gawrone!
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vierbit
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Joined: 31 October 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 44 |
![]() Posted: 21 February 2020 at 12:27pm |
![]() ![]() Finished #62 @Irenaart Really nice tile! |
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Gecimen
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Joined: 17 October 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3856 |
![]() Posted: 21 February 2020 at 2:39pm |
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@amazonite; nice tile! @vierbit; that space is very well connected now, great work Vierbit!
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Amazonite
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Joined: 28 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
![]() Posted: 21 February 2020 at 5:47pm |
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Thank you Gecimen!
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Irenaart
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Joined: 13 May 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 457 |
![]() Posted: 22 February 2020 at 3:16am |
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@vierbit; Thank you! I had good motivation in the neighborhood...
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pizzalated
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Joined: 16 May 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 47 |
![]() Posted: 22 February 2020 at 2:52pm |
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HELL YEAH can i have #86?
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Gecimen
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![]() Posted: 22 February 2020 at 8:27pm |
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Sure thing!
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pizzalated
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Joined: 16 May 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 47 |
![]() Posted: 22 February 2020 at 10:46pm |
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I already started, here's a WIP <:-) someone messed the pyramid up a little bit so I tried to make it look right without ruining everyones's life, hope it looks okay lol
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Gecimen
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![]() Posted: 23 February 2020 at 2:24pm |
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Looking great already pizzalated.
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Amazonite
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Joined: 28 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
![]() Posted: 25 February 2020 at 3:24am |
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Could I have tile 70? Gawrone convinced me to take another tile ahahaha
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Irenaart
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![]() Posted: 25 February 2020 at 4:19am |
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@Amazonite; Sure you can... #70 is yours.
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Igor_de_Beaufort
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Joined: 06 March 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3 |
![]() Posted: 25 February 2020 at 2:47pm |
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can I claim #79 once the #86 is finished?
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Irenaart
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![]() Posted: 26 February 2020 at 1:02am |
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@Igor_de_Beaufort; you can start working on it and then just adapt the edge with #86. So, #79 is yours.
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pizzalated
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Joined: 16 May 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 47 |
![]() Posted: 29 February 2020 at 3:50pm |
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Hello!! Just realized I'm reaching the time limit. I'm almost done??? I'll be sending an update when I get to my computer.
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Here it is. Honestly I can't tell if this is good enough or if it could use some tweaking, let me know @Igor_de_Beaufort: I think I should continue that rock right there but maybe you should start and then I'll continue.
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CuriousBeefJerky
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Joined: 23 April 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 132 |
![]() Posted: 29 February 2020 at 9:28pm |
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@pizzalated Nice tile. The only tweaks I'd see is that the top bit of the pyramid looks a bit "flat" compared to the bottom of the pyramid. I think a highlight along the right edge, like on the pyramid base, could solve this. As it is, it looks closer to wood or rough stone that doesn't reflect much light. ![]() Giorgio Tsoukalos is a really nice touch to this colab though. He fits in well! Lol. @Irena I'm always amazed how much detail and texture you can get so smoothly on such a small canvas! Nice tile! @Vierbit That's some amazing use of the colors on the creature thing!
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Amazonite
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Joined: 28 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
![]() Posted: 01 March 2020 at 4:09pm |
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Just wanted to let everybody know that I need some more time on tile 70, my GPU blew up the other day. So that caused some delay. My computer is working again now though.
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Gecimen
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![]() Posted: 01 March 2020 at 10:29pm |
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@pizzalated, looking great! @amazonite, that's ok buddy.
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pizzalated
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Joined: 16 May 2025 Online Status: Offline Posts: 47 |
![]() Posted: 02 March 2020 at 7:36am |
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@CuriousBeefJerky thank you! I was going for an organic look so I made it look more squishy.
Still unfinished, until #79 and I work something out. |
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Igor_de_Beaufort
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Joined: 06 March 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3 |
![]() Posted: 06 March 2020 at 6:33am |
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Hello, sorry for the delay I’ll post a WIP soon.
@pizzalated it seems easier for everyone if you just go with whatever you had in mind concerning the rocks and I’ll fill in the gap. |
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Amazonite
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Joined: 28 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33 |
![]() Posted: 07 March 2020 at 5:49pm |
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Tbh I didn't even want to post this WIP because it's soooo early in development and I will be changing everything. But I need the extra week to work on my tile so I am just posting it for the extra time lol.
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Esven
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Joined: 01 May 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 113 |
![]() Posted: 07 March 2020 at 6:45pm |
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Every good tile starts somewhere, pretty much everything you've ever seen on this site at one point looked like someone was scribbling in MS-Paint. It'll get there I'm sure and don't worry too much about changes.
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