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greenraven
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Alrighty, added in two extra frames for that pause effect.
I tried doing it so that the eyes don't fully open, didn't like it so I didn't keep it. ![]() |
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greenraven
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If there won't be any more objections within the next 24 hours (I waited this long, a little bit more isn't going to kill me) I'll go ahead and put it in the gallery... hopefully for the last time.
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FrostPumpkin
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![]() You have to work hard on the choice of colors, don't use bright colors ! Maybe my edit is a lil' bit too manga styled, I don't know...what do you think about it ? |
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greenraven
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It's not bad. But I already tried something like that (the highlights on the face and hair), and it got shot down, so I took it away.
And I played around with both really bright colors and really dim colors. The current colors, I think, are bright without being too bright. Since I am going for a 'cyber glow' effect (omnipresent lighting). Originally posted by greenraven The first video is to show the type of art style I'm shooting for with the face. Video 1. The second one is to show the light source. (1:15, 2:15 and 6:30 have the light source I'm going for) Video 2. I'm trying to mix the two together. I suppose it won't kill me to take another look at it. I feel like I'm running in circles now chasing my own tail. ![]() |
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Skaka
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I think one of the biggest problems with what you're trying to do here is trying to put all the different light sources into context on such a small piece. We don't see any of the external light sources so we simply can't put the piece into context.
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Ars longa, vita brevis.
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greenraven
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Yeah that seems to have become apparent.
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Metaru
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Originally posted by greenraven That would actually be cool, maybe it will be a new fad. And did... |
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I ate leel's babies
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Skaka
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May I suggest increasing the canvas to 64x64 pix, that's pretty standard avatar wise ;]
Edited by Skaka - 07 December 2007 at 8:18am |
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greenraven
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If I start over from scratch I might make it bigger. But other than more shoulders, I don't really see what else I could add. Maybe a mag, buy that's about it.
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Skaka
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You could add light sources around him without necessarily making him bigger, but just raising him up to the center, ergo we'd be able to put the pic in context. Just a thought if you'd don't see it working then don't compromise you're vision man ;] Mind if I do an avvy in a similar vein? (never played Phantasy Star though :/
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Ars longa, vita brevis.
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greenraven
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I don't mind if you do one of your own. Go for it.
![]() edit: I played around with the skin tones, lighting, hair color, haircut, facial expressions, etc, etc... Haven't really done anything that I haven't tried in the previous versions, a.k.a. "I've gone as far as I can go at my current skill level/I'm out of ideas", so I'll go ahead and re-submit it now. ![]() Edited by greenraven - 07 December 2007 at 3:58pm |
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Metaru
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maybe its a bit late, but honestly, the animation doesn't do anything for the image, and rather it makes it look a bit... bad. in resume, the animation is pointless, IMO.
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Skaka
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Ok well I was gonna come say that I'd wait for you to submit before putting mine in the wip thread but seeing as you say you've gone as far as far can go I'm gonna go ahead and post mine in the WIP :P
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