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Quote greenraven Replybullet Posted: 05 December 2007 at 12:08am
Alrighty, added in two extra frames for that pause effect.

I tried doing it so that the eyes don't fully open, didn't like it so I didn't keep it.


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Quote greenraven Replybullet Posted: 06 December 2007 at 6:14am
If there won't be any more objections within the next 24 hours (I waited this long, a little bit more isn't going to kill me) I'll go ahead and put it in the gallery... hopefully for the last time. 
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Quote FrostPumpkin Replybullet Posted: 06 December 2007 at 9:47am


You have to work hard on the choice of colors, don't use bright colors !
Maybe my edit is a lil' bit too manga styled, I don't know...what do you think about it ?
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Quote greenraven Replybullet Posted: 06 December 2007 at 10:28am
It's not bad. But I already tried something like that (the highlights on the face and hair), and it got shot down, so I took it away.

And I played around with both really bright colors and really dim colors. The current colors, I think, are bright without being too bright. Since I am going for a 'cyber glow' effect (omnipresent lighting).

Originally posted by greenraven

The first video is to show the type of art style I'm shooting for with the face. Video 1.

The second one is to show the light source. (1:15, 2:15 and 6:30 have the light source I'm going for) Video 2.

I'm trying to mix the two together.

I suppose it won't kill me to take another look at it. I feel like I'm running in circles now chasing my own tail.
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Quote Skaka Replybullet Posted: 06 December 2007 at 11:52am
I think one of the biggest problems with what you're trying to do here is trying to put all the different light sources into context on such a small piece. We don't see any of the external light sources so we simply can't put the piece into context.
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Quote greenraven Replybullet Posted: 06 December 2007 at 7:11pm
Yeah that seems to have become apparent. 
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 06 December 2007 at 9:11pm
Originally posted by greenraven

That would actually be cool, maybe it will be a new fad.


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Quote Skaka Replybullet Posted: 07 December 2007 at 5:56am
May I suggest increasing the canvas to 64x64 pix, that's pretty standard avatar wise ;]

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Quote greenraven Replybullet Posted: 07 December 2007 at 3:15pm
If I start over from scratch I might make it bigger. But other than more shoulders, I don't really see what else I could add. Maybe a mag, buy that's about it.
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Quote Skaka Replybullet Posted: 07 December 2007 at 3:40pm
You could add light sources around him without necessarily making him bigger, but just raising him up to the center, ergo we'd be able to put the pic in context. Just a thought if you'd don't see it working then don't compromise you're vision man ;] Mind if I do an avvy in a similar vein? (never played Phantasy Star though :/
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Quote greenraven Replybullet Posted: 07 December 2007 at 3:42pm
I don't mind if you do one of your own. Go for it. 

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I played around with the skin tones, lighting, hair color, haircut, facial expressions, etc, etc... Haven't really done anything that I haven't tried in the previous versions, a.k.a. "I've gone as far as I can go at my current skill level/I'm out of ideas", so I'll go ahead and re-submit it now.


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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 07 December 2007 at 6:18pm
maybe its a bit late, but honestly, the animation doesn't do anything for the image, and rather it makes it look a bit... bad. in resume, the animation is pointless, IMO.
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Quote Skaka Replybullet Posted: 07 December 2007 at 6:52pm
Ok well I was gonna come say that I'd wait for you to submit before putting mine in the wip thread but seeing as you say you've gone as far as far can go I'm  gonna go ahead and post mine in the WIP :P
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