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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 29 June 2007 at 9:35am

the best, the best thing you can do now, is to use the block drawing to fix all those ANATOMY PROBLEMS. and THEN think about couloring AND THEN work on the shadowing.
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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 29 June 2007 at 11:51am
I just zoomed into it to make an edit. You need to clean up your lines as well. You've got a lot of double pixels going on.
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Quote eckered Replybullet Posted: 29 June 2007 at 2:30pm
also
-you have waaay to many colors.
-dont AA into a white background if you are going to make it transparent
-your colors need to have a unified saturation.  right now, they are all over the place
-you need to increase the contrast in each of the colors.  you could get away with 4 skin tones, 3 for the top, and 3 for the hair.  right now you have at least 5 in each.
 
these are some of the main problems with the colors (that i posted before, btw).  ill cary my edit further, and color it, so you can see.
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Quote eckered Replybullet Posted: 29 June 2007 at 5:20pm
 
i even video'd it.
 
ill upload it later, or if you guys would rather just see the crappy youtube link, thats good too.  post, and ill upload it.
 
also, any of you guys got any good video editing freeware?  i just need basic things like playing it at 2x, and prehaps making a simple intro.
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 29 June 2007 at 11:00pm
thats not a really good edit, tbh. its all bloated and allmost pillowy.. the anatomy didnt really improve either
i am tired so this isnt perfect either, but owell


Edited by snader - 29 June 2007 at 11:02pm

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Quote Dr. Morph Replybullet Posted: 30 June 2007 at 12:01am
Wow, thanks!
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 30 June 2007 at 5:26am

wow... you really transformed 'her' into 'him'
Originally posted by eckered

also, any of you guys got any good video editing freeware?  i just need basic things like playing it at 2x, and prehaps making a simple intro.

Windows Movie Maker?(it's incluided with you XP)
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Quote eckered Replybullet Posted: 30 June 2007 at 8:01am
yeah, the masculanity kinda was because i added the outline around the sillouette, and it bulked everything up.
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