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Quote leel Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2007 at 9:48am
No, I still don't think you get it. Look at it more.  Your light just makes no sense.  At the point that it needs to be the lightest, you abruptly make the color darker.  On the other side you don't put in the reflected light, and the middle you left completely untouched which doesn't fit in at all and is actually just wrong. 
'Study'  means to look at references long and hard and make conclusions from them.  You clearly didn't actually learned anything from all the examples of ligh rays since you still only have a couple that I drew in for you.  It needs to be more consistent.  And I won't give more examples because I'm starting to feel like I'm bashing you than helping you. 
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Quote Kfuchoin Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2007 at 9:53am
sorry but this is my first attempt at a glass and i know i just used the style that you posted in the edit but i'll work over it more.. sorry for that =/
amm i don't think i'ld finish this on time.. it's being my best pixels.. and i want it to give my best..., leel you are actually helping me.. like i said before "I know the technical aspects i just need to apply them"
 
 
 
any better?
 
dietehred the light rays:
 
 
diethered the glass shine..


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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2007 at 12:42pm
I think the dithering on the glass could be larger.. the dithering part should be around as large as the 'flat color' parts.. I think.
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Quote Kfuchoin Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2007 at 1:14pm
roger!
 
here it is:
 
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2007 at 1:54pm
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roger!
 
here it is:
 

better!
the contrast between lightest glass color number 1 and number 2 is pretty large, and the one between number 2 and 3 very small.. maybe you could search for a better color between 1 and 3?? (pixel outlaw made great tool)
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Quote Kfuchoin Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2007 at 2:01pm
oh dude that's cause the 2nd lightest color is from the outside =)
 
btw.. tehre are 2 colros for teh shine...
3 for the gradient
and the 2 colors for the building (the almost black, and the purpleish)
 
 
so id on't see any problem there...
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2007 at 2:12pm
Originally posted by Kfuchoin

oh dude that's cause the 2nd lightest color is from the outside =)
 
btw.. tehre are 2 colros for teh shine...
3 for the gradient
and the 2 colors for the building (the almost black, and the purpleish)
 
 
so id on't see any problem there...

If you have allready recycled that color from somewhere else there isnt a big problem :)
You could try to change it a bit and see what happens, but if I would have made this I would not have done it (just cos im lazy) :) Btw you can make the dithering strokes on the outside (the water) some larger too, and maybe some more advanced :)
Now you can really see 3 stripes of different colors of water, but its maybe better if you cant see that any more :)


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Quote Kfuchoin Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2007 at 2:16pm
ok so i should diether more the outside gradient?
and i would see if i play a bit with the color that you suggested =D
damn i got 20 colors >.< i need to recycle more...
 
any help with what colors recycle? plz.. i'm seriously stucked.. and i dunno what coors to recycle


Edited by Kfuchoin - 29 July 2007 at 2:35pm
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2007 at 2:54pm
Do you have Graphics gale?



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Quote Kfuchoin Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2007 at 2:57pm
yeah and cosmigo..
right now 19 =S
 
 
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2007 at 3:16pm
in GG you can easy see the full pallete when  you are in 256 color mode, and than you can sort out the useless ones.. :)
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Quote Metaru Replybullet Posted: 29 July 2007 at 9:45pm
remueve esos ridiculos haces de luz y mandalo asi tal cual. realmente no entendiste el comportamiento de los haces de luz, asi que no te metas con aquello que no dominas, por lo menos no por ahora. ademas, dithering on the domo? its made of glass, it shouldn't have dither. or just the minimal possible.
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