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mashimi
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Quote mashimi Replybullet Topic: Revision Required.. ?
    Posted: 18 September 2010 at 5:31pm
So I have made my 'Wee!' from the template, I made the background transparent, followed the guide and I did take my time on it. To submit my 'Wee!' I had to submit it to the Pixel Joint Gallery, and I did. I read on the 'Wee!' website this; "All skill levels are welcome, but I do ask that people put an honest effort into creating their characters. This isn't a competition to create the most WeeGuys, it's just supposed to be some fun pixelling practice. Think quality, not quantity, and just have fun with it." So I'm wondering why I need revision?
Any help would be great.

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My 'Wee!': http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/56073.htm
Wee! website: http://www.pixeljoint.com/projects/wee/
Submit page on Wee! website: http://www.pixeljoint.com/projects/wee/guidelines.asp
Wee! tutorial: http://www.pixeljoint.com/projects/wee/tutorial.asp
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 18 September 2010 at 6:15pm
the wee! project is a bit old and gallery standards may have changed since then.
tbh your wee looks like it took very little time or effort to make. if you'd like to improve it there's always the WIP forum, but at a glance I see:
colors hyper-saturated
you didn't stray outside the template at all (not necessary but usually helpful and adds visual interest)
shading on the face is too low contrast to be visible at 1x and doesn't help to define the features.

additionally, it may have been sent back due to a low voting score in the public queue.

most of your art seems to be lacking in very fundamental areas. i won't discourage you from pixelling, but i will say that at this stage in your artistic development daily sketching from observation and practicing the fundamentals in a workable traditional medium like drawing will be the best way for you to build your skills up enough to ensure the work you create will be accepted into the gallery. the WIP forum isn't limited to pixelart, so if you want to post sketches there, you may do so and it may be easier for us to point out where you're going wrong with the fundamentals.

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Quote mashimi Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2010 at 12:22am
the reason i pixel is so i don't have to get the pencil and paper, i guess.. i have put in about 5 or 6 WIP thread so far. maybe i'm just a little annoyed because i haven't gotten any of my pixel art to the gallery :(
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2010 at 6:19am
I think you are more hurt than annoyed and I feel for you because since you've joined you have shown interest and get involved. Making WIP threads is the best insurance your work will be added when WIP threads show some level of work, progress and improvement. You do start them but quickly abandon them. Be patient and focused :)
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 19 September 2010 at 8:56am
you can't skip the pencil and paper part. you'll never be able to improve if you don't study the fundamentals, and pixel art is a tedious medium to do so in.
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