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circuscommando
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Joined: 27 April 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4 |
   Topic: WIP skeletonPosted: 20 March 2011 at 3:52pm |
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eagle28
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Joined: 31 August 2009 Online Status: Offline Posts: 15 |
Posted: 20 March 2011 at 4:03pm |
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Looking good, but if hes a skeleton arent legs and arms a bit too wide? or is he wearing something on them?
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tanuki
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Joined: 01 April 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 333 |
Posted: 20 March 2011 at 5:22pm |
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The thighs/femurs are way too wide, except maybe the far right one. If the color is used as an outline then it looks about right, but since you've already used color as the defining stroke for the ribs and filled in the shapes of the skull and pelvis it would be inconsistent. I think you should stick with using the color as the shape of the bones, not having an outline, and reduce the thickness of the femurs and upper arm bones.
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circuscommando
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Joined: 27 April 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4 |
Posted: 20 March 2011 at 5:57pm |
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tanuki
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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 8:48pm |
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The ribs look very nice, by the way. The left or right one is better than the middle one.
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cure
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Posted: 20 March 2011 at 11:53pm |
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spine looks too straight, it should naturally have a slight s-curve. arms (shoulders) look like they attach a little too far forward.
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circuscommando
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Joined: 27 April 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4 |
Posted: 21 March 2011 at 4:39pm |
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