Pixel Joint Forum: Revision needed

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   My piece needs revision it says, but I feel that this may be due to what it displays... So I can't submit things to the gallery if its something that people "don't want to see"? 
Or is it due to a major lack in quality, if this is the case I will try to improve it.

This is it:

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Wyeth Midshipman Joined: 04 December 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Topic: Revision needed Posted: 07 April 2011 at 7:59am
	My piece needs revision it says, but I feel that this may be due to what it displays... So I can't submit things to the gallery if its something that people "don't want to see"? Or is it due to a major lack in quality, if this is the case I will try to improve it. This is it:
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tanuki Commander Joined: 01 April 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 333	Posted: 07 April 2011 at 8:42am
	I don't know if it's the issue or not, but I don't really think this is something people would enjoy looking at. As for quality, there's several issues. The perspective between head and body is off, the head is far too large. The ears don't look like rabbit ears. The nose and mouth are off center to the rabbit's left. the front legs are different thicknesses. The right front leg looks a little crooked in the middle.
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Wyeth Midshipman Joined: 04 December 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 07 April 2011 at 12:40pm
	Oh well, then I will try drawing something more appealing later on. I didn't realize that you are not allowed to upload things that are not considered "enjoyable" . Or rather that its not possible then. Thanks for the answer
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 12 January 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 08 April 2011 at 9:53pm
	We never judge on 'what it is' or its appeal to the masses. Artistic freedom is encouraged and supported. I did not send this back but would have had I seen it in the queue for having a useless BG, which is a PJ rule and a personal pet peeve. Beyond that perhaps, the reason another Mod sent it back was for the slightly messy pixelling going on with the blade jumping and some poor banding and these are good things to master as soon as you can. The highlights in the blade are kinda inpresice and could be better illustrated...so yea, its not that bad but could certainly be improved in the technical pixel pushing sense. Don't give up, keep at it, use the forum's WIP when you need help or have questions :) Edited by jalonso - 08 April 2011 at 9:53pm
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Wyeth Midshipman Joined: 04 December 2010 Online Status: Offline Posts: 10	Posted: 09 April 2011 at 12:51am
	Ah no no it hasn't gotten a BG^^ I just used a screencap software and my picture viewer sets everything to a gray BG by default... it is in fact transparent and I submitted it that way too :) Thanks for the critcism and that's good to know I had mixed feelings about what you adressed (community-wise) That was exactly what I wanted to know... then I will put some more work into it and re-submit :) Thanks for restoring my fondness of pixeljoint
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