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Unhero
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Joined: 11 May 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 87 |
   Topic: [WIP]Help finish [closed]Posted: 11 May 2011 at 11:16am |
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Please help to finish, face and shadows
  p.s. for admins, this topic can be closed Edited by Unhero - 25 May 2011 at 10:48am |
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dpixel
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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 12:34pm |
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Your avatar looks pretty good. Why not use that approach?
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Unhero
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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 12:38pm |
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Originally posted by dpixel Not obtained draw the female body Your avatar looks pretty good. Why not use that approach? p.s. sorry my bad english skill |
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Zeratanus
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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 1:02pm |
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You try it first, then we'll critique and help you as you go.
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Unhero
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Posted: 11 May 2011 at 10:09pm |
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The first attempt, slightly redrew
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Unhero
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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 1:33am |
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Morning work, please help with shadows
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Unhero
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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:13pm |
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Which better?
Edited by Unhero - 12 May 2011 at 11:13pm |
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tanuki
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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:35pm |
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bottom bricks are better.
for shadows, just choose a direction for light to come from, and then draw shadows on the other side of the object. like this- 
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Unhero
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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:47pm |
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tanuki, thanks a lot
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Unhero
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Posted: 12 May 2011 at 11:57pm |
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My version of the shadows
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Unhero
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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 1:08am |
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what windows look better? that can be added to the wall?
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Unhero
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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 5:39am |
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refresh, picture very static, tell me please, what to add?
Edited by Unhero - 13 May 2011 at 5:39am |
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onek
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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 10:32am |
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heres an edit on one of ur characters ....
NOTES 1. made shoulders more narrow 2. made hips wider 3. flattened feet 4. cleaned some shapes and outlines 5. desaturated colors 6. increased contrast 7. palette clean up (reduced colors to a minimum, the color ramps are sharing colors now, instead of each color having their own set of light, medium , dark etc.... note : its almost half of ur original color count) |
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Unhero
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Posted: 13 May 2011 at 11:01am |
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onek, thank you, your variant very nice, and special thanks for you explanation :)
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Unhero
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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 10:46am |
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Please show my mistakes, especially in colors. Door and windows are not finished yet.
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r1k
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Posted: 14 May 2011 at 9:52pm |
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why dont you try sticking to one thing at a time? Youre not going to
improve if you move on to something new everytime someone posts a
critique.
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Unhero
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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 3:19am |
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r1k, Thanks for the advice, I understood you:)
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Unhero
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Posted: 15 May 2011 at 10:38pm |
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That you add this, or removed?
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