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   Sibix inspired me with his amazing room, so I figured I'd start working on mine.

I am putting this in WIP because I am still new to pixel art, and want
c&c throughout the work so it can be as good as possible.

The goal here is a crime-scene photo shoot. The white thing is a big
tarp... I plan to add standing lights and cool shadow effects, and also
a tripod camera...

C&C ME!

Thanks

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Lowspeed Seaman Joined: 29 March 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 16	Topic: apartment entry Posted: 12 April 2005 at 10:18am
	Sibix inspired me with his amazing room, so I figured I'd start working on mine. I am putting this in WIP because I am still new to pixel art, and want c&c throughout the work so it can be as good as possible. The goal here is a crime-scene photo shoot. The white thing is a big tarp... I plan to add standing lights and cool shadow effects, and also a tripod camera... C&C ME! Thanks
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 12 April 2005 at 10:29am
	The red against the white is very shocking. Really grabs your eye. Good job. The white tarp shoul probably have folds and shadows and drooping and all that to give it some realism. The arms don't seem to line up correctly. The body's left arm should be connected at the shoulder -- not mid-torso.
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Lowspeed Seaman Joined: 29 March 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 16	Posted: 12 April 2005 at 10:46am
	*Originally posted by sedgemonkey* The red against the white is very shocking. Really grabs your eye. Good job. The white tarp shoul probably have folds and shadows and drooping and all that to give it some realism. The arms don't seem to line up correctly. The body's left arm should be connected at the shoulder -- not mid-torso. Thanks sedge! I will work on the changes you suggested when I have a free moment here at the office.
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sedgemonkey Admiral Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669	Posted: 23 April 2005 at 12:40pm
	The yellow tape is a nice touch. Another thing that might help too is to have some random photo equipment lying around like a tripod and lights.
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kankki Commander Joined: 26 March 2005 Location: Finland Online Status: Offline Posts: 195	Posted: 18 June 2005 at 6:50am
	Nooo ,JPG!! Jpg is the worst filetype for pixelart. You should use gif or png.
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