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AtomicMushroom
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Quote AtomicMushroom Replybullet Topic: Roman Game
    Posted: 11 June 2011 at 12:13am
Decide to cross-post from Pixelation.
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Some sprites for a game. Any comments appreciated.








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Quote Cotter Replybullet Posted: 11 June 2011 at 10:26am
the background is brilliant. keep texturizing and you'll have a really impressive piece.

how many frames is the run? I recommend adding a couple or perhaps making the man's head move less; it looks just a bit choppy right now.
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 11 June 2011 at 10:43am
something about the head bothers me on the run cycle, it's like he's lookin' ahead too stiffly. maybe if it had a little up/down nod to it, or if he ran with it tilted down just a tad.
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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 11 June 2011 at 11:55am
Originally posted by cure

something about the head bothers me on the run cycle, it's like he's lookin' ahead too stiffly. maybe if it had a little up/down nod to it, or if he ran with it tilted down just a tad.


Maybe once he's dressed something on the helm can suggest the head nod.
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