Pixel Joint Forum: [WIP] Will explode!!!

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   Hello, can I help a new pixel art? see how he is so far:

Cool, huh? Well, can you help me in light blue in the face? Thank you.

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QueenP Seaman Joined: 31 August 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 12	Topic: [WIP] Will explode!!! Posted: 10 September 2011 at 3:48pm
	Hello, can I help a new pixel art? see how he is so far: Cool, huh? Well, can you help me in light blue in the face? Thank you.
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Hapiel Rear Admiral Joined: 14 April 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3264	Posted: 10 September 2011 at 5:56pm
	Why do you want light blue in the face? You can not draw it before you realize what it is. Is it really supposed to be the reflectin of the bomb's fuse? In that case it would have to be really really dark to be able to see that kind of stuff.. Aside from the blue: I think your bomb is not very visible, it is perfectly hidden in the black background which is not a good thing IMO, and there is no need for selecting new colors for the fuse, all the colors required are already to be found in the face!
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CELS Commander Joined: 23 September 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 758	Posted: 10 September 2011 at 6:07pm
	I agree with Hapiel on all counts, and I'm also not sure why you have blue light on both sides of the face, when the fuse is clearly on the left side. As others have pointed out elsewhere, fuses don't really make a lot of light when lit.
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QueenP Seaman Joined: 31 August 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 12	Posted: 11 September 2011 at 8:00am
	I understood, but there is in the dark, so either way the light the fuse of the bomb has to reflect the boy's face.
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cure Commander Joined: 23 March 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2859	Posted: 11 September 2011 at 9:19am
	I don't understand why the light is blue. the lit fuse is essentially fire, should be warm colors (ie yellow). the fuse is a weak light source, the top half of the face shouldn't get anywhere near as much light as the bottom half (nor should the right half get as much light as the left half). nothing much else to say, I second the crits already given (bomb is invisible, etc)
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