Pixel Joint Forum: Mugshot (C&C)

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It's a mugshot that I finished today. I really think that it still needs work.
Mostly the bangs on his hair. I really don't know what to do with them. 
I'm seriously blind without critiques.

EDIT: Source material here 

Edited by Jawnsunn - 10 December 2011 at 10:08pm

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Jawnsunn Seaman Joined: 27 November 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 6	Topic: Mugshot (C&C) Posted: 10 December 2011 at 10:03pm
	It's a mugshot that I finished today. I really think that it still needs work. Mostly the bangs on his hair. I really don't know what to do with them. I'm seriously blind without critiques. EDIT: Source material here Edited by Jawnsunn - 10 December 2011 at 10:08pm
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Partack Commander Joined: 20 October 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 260	Posted: 11 December 2011 at 5:05am
	lmao that guys hair is HUGE.. and yet.. it.. just.. kinda.. works.. o.o only thing i can spot at the moment is on the left where the hair separates into spikes, is probably separating too early.. i know you wanted to convey that it was spiked in the mugshot but i think showing some blue inside the > makes it look weird for me.. the top one is probably fine the way it is.. other than that little nitpick.. lol. he has REALLY big hair. XD i like it. Edited by Partack - 11 December 2011 at 5:05am
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Furritus Seaman Joined: 31 July 2011 Online Status: Offline Posts: 16	Posted: 11 December 2011 at 5:19am
	The slant of the portrait is totally off, P.S.why do i have to clear this post form every time before typing in it? Edited by Furritus - 11 December 2011 at 5:19am
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