This is my first post, and I need help to upgrade those drawings:







Why I doing this? Beceasu Pixel Joint doesn't accept these arts I mean, It's can't be Approval


P.S: Sorry for my bad english I speak spanish.

Edited by PAMVllo - 19 December 2011 at 1:47pm

first piece- suffers from pillow shading and inconsistent lighting. you need to shade according to volumes rather than shapes, and use a fixed light source.

second piece- no horizon line, uncertain sense of space. not enough contrast between grass and sky. rope is too thick and too bright, and makes an unrealistic loop when it meets the tree rather than an actual knot. can't tell what's hanging from it or how. tree needs more contrast.

third piece- arm on our left looks broken, arm on our right is foreshortened incorrectly. fingers are also too small for the palm and too far-spaced. not enough contrast in skin.

also I agree with the above, working on a much smaller scale will be more beneficial for learning the fundamental technical aspects of pixel art