Pixel Joint Forum: Warrior Line Art WIP

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   Ive been working on this slowly for a couple of weeks now, but the more I do, the more I feel theres something wrong with it.  I was hoping one of you could point it out to me.  Somethings wrong with the head/shoulder area.  Any other crits you guys have would be good too. :D

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Omegavolt Commander Joined: 03 March 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 227	Topic: Warrior Line Art WIP Posted: 09 January 2006 at 6:39am
	Ive been working on this slowly for a couple of weeks now, but the more I do, the more I feel theres something wrong with it. I was hoping one of you could point it out to me. Somethings wrong with the head/shoulder area. Any other crits you guys have would be good too. :D
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randomblink Commander Joined: 13 February 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 403	Posted: 09 January 2006 at 8:51am
	The only thing I can think is that the chest is too short. If you continue on this path, his hands will hang down to his knees... Just my opinion...
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Filax_666 Commander Joined: 10 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 108	Posted: 09 January 2006 at 8:58am
	*Originally posted by randomblink* The only thing I can think is that the chest is too short. If you continue on this path, his hands will hang down to his knees... Just my opinion... That´s true. Also his hands are too big (comparing with his face).
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Omegavolt Commander Joined: 03 March 2005 Location: United States Online Status: Offline Posts: 227	Posted: 09 January 2006 at 9:11am
	*Originally posted by randomblink* The only thing I can think is that the chest is too short. If you continue on this path, his hands will hang down to his knees... Just my opinion... Hmm, I see what youre saying. My plan was to make his feet end slightly lower than the tip of the sword, which would put his knees below where hands ended. I think the armor is whats throwing off the view, I should just chuck it and redesign it anyway, its not proportioned correctly and it looks crappy. :P And I'll try to calm those hands down Filax. Its hard to reference for me when my pieces are this big. ;) Thanks for the crits.
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randomblink Commander Joined: 13 February 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 403	Posted: 09 January 2006 at 9:38am
	Good luck!
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Filax_666 Commander Joined: 10 August 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 108	Posted: 09 January 2006 at 11:46am
	Hands are always a pain I'd sugest you to take some photos or find some reference on the web...
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