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    Posted: 06 May 2012 at 2:33pm
Give me ideas to my new work, post edits and suggestions to colors, lineart and more.






sorry i'ma newbie in pixel art

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Quote Mille Replybullet Posted: 06 May 2012 at 4:02pm
Face is looking good and expressive, left arm seems ok while right one folds in a weird way which may it seems flat, and the hand is a bit small compared to the other one. Shoulders are of different size as well it seems.
Also not a critique on the work itself but if you want advice on something it might be a good idea to give a few directions: is this guy going to be a single sprite, or put in a scene, fighting something else ?

Also even if you're not sure at all what his legs are going to look like at this point a rough draft helps to situate him, just to let people know what you're up to, so they can suggest things. That may sound stupid but it would also makes it more appealing which will help to lure comments and critiques to you, as of now it seems a bit lost in all that white space.
The more you give the more can be given back I'd say.
Hope this edit helps somehow, just quick idea of how I'd present that. May absolutely not be for what you're looking, but at least it'll help you picture what I said...

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Quote dorgao. Replybullet Posted: 06 May 2012 at 7:57pm
Originally posted by Mille

Face is looking good and expressive, left arm seems ok while right one folds in a weird way which may it seems flat, and the hand is a bit small compared to the other one. Shoulders are of different size as well it seems.Also not a critique on the work itself but if you want advice on something it might be a good idea to give a few directions: is this guy going to be a single sprite, or put in a scene, fighting something else ? Also even if you're not sure at all what his legs are going to look like at this point a rough draft helps to situate him, just to let people know what you're up to, so they can suggest things. That may sound stupid but it would also makes it more appealing which will help to lure comments and critiques to you, as of now it seems a bit lost in all that white space. The more you give the more can be given back I'd say.Hope this edit helps somehow, just quick idea of how I'd present that. May absolutely not be for what you're looking, but at least it'll help you picture what I said...

Yes! is just single sprite
and the idea is good, i can make the fighter Yuri Boyka from the movie Undisputed

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Quote dorgao. Replybullet Posted: 06 May 2012 at 8:21pm

Well, this is the lineart that i make in the legs is good ?
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Quote Vaggelis Replybullet Posted: 07 May 2012 at 5:55am
If you are going with a realistic anatomy, your anatomy is wrong everywhere.
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Quote dorgao. Replybullet Posted: 07 May 2012 at 5:58am
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If you are going with a realistic anatomy, your anatomy is wrong everywhere.
I do not quite understand what you meant.
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Quote Vaggelis Replybullet Posted: 07 May 2012 at 6:01am
I am talking about the anatomy of the body.
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Quote dorgao. Replybullet Posted: 07 May 2012 at 6:05am
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I am talking about the anatomy of the body.
oh! yes, But my goal would be to just make a remake of a character like a Jinn Style understand?
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Quote Vaggelis Replybullet Posted: 07 May 2012 at 6:13am
What is a "Jinn Style"?
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Quote dorgao. Replybullet Posted: 07 May 2012 at 6:23am
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What is a "Jinn Style"?
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Quote Vaggelis Replybullet Posted: 07 May 2012 at 6:26am
Okay.
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