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Aluthreney
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Quote Aluthreney Replybullet Topic: pixel piece + animation
    Posted: 30 May 2012 at 12:01pm
 
So this is the fist pixel piece I've created that I'm not completly embarased in displaying. Comment and criticize so that I may evolve :D
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Quote philippejugnet Replybullet Posted: 30 May 2012 at 12:50pm
I think its too simple and with a lot of jaggies. You could use way more colors and better ones. Quick edit:

Added perspective, added hue shift, added more colors and thats it.

By the way, why did you posted it on the gallery if its still a WIP?
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Quote Aluthreney Replybullet Posted: 30 May 2012 at 3:06pm
Well, I'm new to this. The fact is that I posted it here because it got rejected on the gallery. I really like how you redid the skull, but I have no idea how to do that.
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Quote AngelOTG Replybullet Posted: 30 May 2012 at 3:09pm
Use references. Look up some images of skulls on Google, and try to match the shapes.
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Quote jeremy Replybullet Posted: 30 May 2012 at 3:22pm
Look at references. Copy the way light falls on the references. It looks like you've drawn what you think a skull looks like.
e: left this window open for too long :L


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Quote Mille Replybullet Posted: 31 May 2012 at 3:14pm
Philippe's edit is more of a completely different piece in a different style. Adding perspective can be a nice touch or not, depending on what you try to do, if it is part of a scene or it is more of an icon.

I'd say from this I would either go into something more realistic or more cartoony, it's a bit in between both which is why it may lack tension and not look that interesting. The animation as well is a bit of gimmick at this stage, I'd rather developp it or remove it.
Une signature? Comme Zorro ou Batman?
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