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Buddy90
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    Posted: 01 August 2012 at 9:37pm
Hey guys, it's been a long time since I've pixelled anything, so I decided to try away a simple mockup to get my feet wet.

Fire away those criticisms!
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Quote LachieD Replybullet Posted: 02 August 2012 at 1:38pm
I like the colors. The ground tiles seem odd and unrefined. What are they supposed to represent? The background needs more clear lines, as well as the sun. Why isn't it a perfect circle?
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Quote Buddy90 Replybullet Posted: 02 August 2012 at 9:39pm
OK, I took the comments into consideration. I also changed the characters to more interesting ones.
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