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    Posted: 29 September 2012 at 4:52am


I've made this. any critiques?
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Quote - Replybullet Posted: 30 September 2012 at 1:28am
Any criticisms?
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Quote - Replybullet Posted: 02 October 2012 at 9:49am
I made it without shading this time.

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Quote Bleda Replybullet Posted: 02 October 2012 at 10:45am
It's a bit too small, but the design looks nice.
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Quote - Replybullet Posted: 04 October 2012 at 6:09am
Any other comments? Anyone?
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Quote cure Replybullet Posted: 04 October 2012 at 7:47am
All the same crits as last time, it lacks volume because it lacks proper shading. Find pixelled shops in the gallery that you like, try to emulate them, think about your ship as a three dimensional object not just geometric shapes, and don't bump your thread so often, especially without any update.
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