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ZombieFish
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Quote ZombieFish Replybullet Topic: Swordssss
    Posted: 29 March 2013 at 8:33pm
Well I only have one sword but...



I like it so far, but I just feel like I've done something wrong with the shading in general so any critique is greatly appreciated.
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Quote Etheric_Shock Replybullet Posted: 29 March 2013 at 11:45pm
The shine in the sword is great. The only thing I see wrong is the blade shading on the right side. Since your light source is coming from top-left, you should put some kind of emphasis on not just the hilt, but the blade too. The shading is fine in the middle of the blade, however the right side could be darker.
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