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Quote Souly Replybullet Topic: Penguin Paradise
    Posted: 09 March 2006 at 2:59pm

My friend Punky has hired me to create some original buttons for his php forum.
Here is everything I've made so far.

I'd like some critique and critism on the works.
As for the banner in the header, this was not made by me.

It was kindly made by Sibix.

Anyways...


Now for the little buttons I made.
I really don't like the first three...
  
The rest I thought were good.
Mainly because I didn't draw the little mini icons. :'[
    

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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 09 March 2006 at 3:00pm
AA the dark outlines on the buttons. I love the style though.

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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 09 March 2006 at 3:19pm
Those are great Souly <3. I disagree about the outline however, the way you have them is best for a site where things are dynamic and likely to move/change. Things I don't like are the red "x", its too fat. On the first three try a wooden mailbox with icicles for the "mail" with one of those little red flags on them and a "mitten" (red,yellow/orange) for the PM, the penguin arm/paw/wing looks like a black blob now. The icicles are a bit repetitive, maybe have 2/3 diff versions.
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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 09 March 2006 at 4:11pm
To clarify, I meant to AA them with the blue dithering you have. Sorry for any misconceptions.

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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 10 March 2006 at 1:16pm

Hmm... Better delete button?


Worked on the PM button a bit.



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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 10 March 2006 at 3:00pm
Soult that's a better size, but leave it red.
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 10 March 2006 at 7:23pm
I just can't seem to make the PM or the E-mail look good.

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Quote Saiklor Replybullet Posted: 10 March 2006 at 7:45pm
the e-mail outline is too light,
light grey on light blue w/ white is all too similar
could you make it a darker grey ouline?
or think of something other than an envelope to represent e-mail?
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2006 at 6:21am

i'd use a darker purple-ish grey on the enveloppes, to create colour and darkness contrast.

 

why hasnt brian replied here yet? =P


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Quote Psychotic_Carp Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2006 at 7:31am
Nice work but the icq one will have to be changed due to the way thephpbb works (it shows the icq status as a sep image)
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Quote Brian the Great Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2006 at 11:22am
Originally posted by snader

why hasnt brian replied here yet? =P
Because I don't really have any C&C.
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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2006 at 5:42pm

Originally posted by Brian the Great

Originally posted by snader

why hasnt brian replied here yet? =P
Because I don't really have any C&C.

BUT IT HAS PENGUINS!!

allso i just noticed that the text somehow doesnt fit correctly. looks a bit like soap-ad-text.


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Quote JJ_Maxx Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2006 at 9:21pm
Always remember that the icicles will always be larger on the edges of objects because thats where most of the water comes from. Try to make more of an arc with the icicles.

Also, they're too pointy, icicles look better a little rounded. ;)

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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 13 March 2006 at 11:57am

Hmm.. I'm just failing at the tiny icons. :'[
I haven't had enough time to work on the icicles.


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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 18 March 2006 at 1:09pm
Also, I don't know what I'me going to put behind the logo....

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Quote PixelSnader Replybullet Posted: 18 March 2006 at 1:51pm
cracked pieces of ice in water with the occasional penguin on it?

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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 18 March 2006 at 2:40pm
exactly.
ps. Nice to see you around Souly
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 18 March 2006 at 11:23pm

Yeah, my laptop is still in the shop...
So right now I'm surfing from PC to PC.


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Quote Aleiav Replybullet Posted: 19 March 2006 at 9:45pm
How about making the words pop-out 3Dish by putting shadows beneath them? That might look cool.
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 21 March 2006 at 12:00pm

Attempt at a new header...
I'm going to try and make a mailbox that will alert you when you have a new private message.

I was going for a much larger scale then before.
Problem is, now I don't know where I should put the links...



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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 21 March 2006 at 12:27pm
How about on floating icebergs in the water by the text?
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 21 March 2006 at 1:22pm

Well see, that's going to get covered up by the user's penguin.

And then you end up with a lot of blank space on the chip of ice if I was to do that.


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Quote Psychotic_Carp Replybullet Posted: 22 March 2006 at 5:38am
Is the penguin going to be the notification for pm's ? if so you should have him saying "you have a pm" fill the berg up with the links and chunks of ice
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 22 March 2006 at 9:44am

No the penguin simply shows what your customized penguin looks like.
He could simply have a thought bubble with a letter in it, that could let you know when you have a PM...


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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 23 March 2006 at 12:27pm

Hmmm, how's this for the links?


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Quote Monkey 'o Doom Replybullet Posted: 23 March 2006 at 12:41pm
I like it.

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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 23 March 2006 at 12:45pm

So once the code is together the users penguin will go onto the image...
And it should appear something like so.


Next thing is to work on the boarder...


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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 23 March 2006 at 2:12pm
Hmm, i think you should work on the ice a bit more aswel. Links look good btw.
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Quote pixelblink Replybullet Posted: 23 March 2006 at 2:58pm
I don't think you should have it saying "PMS" ... make it "PM" instead
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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 23 March 2006 at 3:16pm
haha pms, add a reflection on the ice to make it feel well... like ice!

i dont think this penguin fits the style. i like the conept, but this needs
serious AA.
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Quote Larwick Replybullet Posted: 23 March 2006 at 3:29pm
Oh, and more 3dness.
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 24 March 2006 at 9:33am
I remade a new penguin base...

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Quote jalonso Replybullet Posted: 24 March 2006 at 9:37am
oh no, I like facing front way better, the blue colors too.
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Quote inkspot Replybullet Posted: 24 March 2006 at 9:50am
The ice-block doesn't remind me an ice block somehow... Shade it, add some reflections etc, think about the shape of the edges and about the light, and don't add that awful penguin to it.

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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 24 March 2006 at 9:51am

Originally posted by jalonso

oh no, I like facing front way better, the blue colors too.

The site lets the user pick the color of the penguin.
That's the black color...


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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 31 March 2006 at 9:37am
Ok now I'm trying to make little icons for every forum.
I'm having a tough time trying to make one for the Welcome Forum...

I've so far made the Announcment forums.


But it's not that great...


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Quote kendi64 Replybullet Posted: 31 March 2006 at 9:56am

All of your things so far (sign, icons, ice) have a darker color outine that the darkest shade in the object. With the penguin, I think you'll have to have the black one have a black outline with a very dark grey for the shading of the penguin then a dark grey for the highlight - likewise for the yellow: darker yellow outline, a bit darker yellow for the shade and a little brighter yellow for the highlight color and the orange too.

A suggestion (which I'm not sure if it will look right), perhaps the ice outline color for the border of the "white" part of the penguin and the light ice color for the shade color of the white then just plain white for the highlight white part.

As for the links, they stand out well right now, but that may change when you develop the ice more

The announcement icon looks good but its uneven. I notice its a 40x41, if you can widen it one more pixel on the right side, it will make the ! look more balanced

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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 31 March 2006 at 10:04am
The penguins are fine.
I'm not changing them anymore since I've already uploaded them to the site and began making items for them.

Besides the fact I have no clue what you wanted me to do to the penguins in the first place.

I'm re-thinking the cube thing for the icon.

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Quote E-Magination Replybullet Posted: 02 April 2006 at 1:29am
I think some are an bit too pillow shading.
 
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Quote MurrMan Replybullet Posted: 02 April 2006 at 9:43am
i think you should stick with the iceburg theme and have all the buttons floating in the water half submerged...

And i don't think the pengiun really fits in with the rest of the stuff. the ice is realistic, but the penguin is illproportioned like a cartoon. he is also too flat. it think that might have been said be fore... i think that the penguin needs more work. just some constructive critizism...


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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 06 April 2006 at 6:33pm
Do you mean the new penguin looks too flat?

Oh, right now I have no ideas for what I could use for new post/no new posts/locked icons...
Here are the defaults... I really need to get an idea for what I should do here.

               
New Post    No new posts    Locked

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Quote Psychotic_Carp Replybullet Posted: 06 April 2006 at 9:37pm
how about signs for them?
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 06 April 2006 at 9:56pm
Hmm?
I'm going to completly re-make them as well as the icon.
If not make them something completly different...

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Quote Brian the Great Replybullet Posted: 07 April 2006 at 2:47am
For the icons: maybe have shiney icecubes for new posts and molten icecubes for no new posts or something? Locked could have an icecube with a big X engraved in it.

Just a suggestion, no real pixel-wise crits.
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 07 April 2006 at 8:27am
Hmm... Right now I've got all the forum icons squares.
I was trying to get away from the whole square thing. D:


See, square. D:

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Quote MurrMan Replybullet Posted: 07 April 2006 at 1:06pm
A lock post should have a cave man frozen in a block of ice
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 11 April 2006 at 10:55am
Hmm, ok so I've moved off of layout and moved back onto the penguins.
Now he wants some skins for the penguins, almost like neopets.

So I've come up with...
As well as
Now I had to keep the beak and feet default color and size.
Only because some of the beak and feet items add on a part of the beak or the foot.

So.. yeah.

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Quote Sibix Replybullet Posted: 11 April 2006 at 2:43pm

if you want it like neopets your gonna want penguins that people can be proud of owning.. no offence but i wouldnt be bothered about joining the site if thats what the pet was. make some more smaller ones with like special powers or effects and even clothes.???

 

just an idea

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Quote Shark Replybullet Posted: 11 April 2006 at 3:05pm
i think maybe vector would be better for this project, would allow you
to resize the images without screwing them up. it also looks a bit
more professional and is less tiem consuming.

i am no way converting you from pixels, just for this project pixel art
wouldnt be my first choise. The penguins dont really match the
standard of your icons/buttons.

If you do carry on with pixels, then i suggest you redraw the
penguin. It doesnt look very penguiney and i dont like the view. i
think the eyes need work aswell. they scareme a bit. also they are
lacking in contrast and penguin texture. i would also up the
saturation.
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Quote Souly Replybullet Posted: 11 April 2006 at 4:47pm
Originally posted by Sibix

if you want it like neopets your gonna want penguins that people can be proud of owning.. no offence but i wouldnt be bothered about joining the site if thats what the pet was. make some more smaller ones with like special powers or effects and even clothes.???

 

just an idea


All the clothes are seperate.
You choose a penguin and then start posting for "Cubes"
It's like gaiaonline only penguins.

And instead of an anime based forum, this one revolves around drugs and sex.
Real life issues. :]

The reason the penguins are large is because I want a deversity of clothes.
And if I make them tiny the clothes will basically just be palette changes.


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