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It's not really meant to have alot of stuff in it, but, mostly, if you've played Half-Life, the rooms in the game are destroyed mostly and you can crawl through air vents.

The guy that is dead there has chains holding him up, if you wondered.

C&C would be very helpful, as this is my first one ever.

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Hossier Seaman Joined: 06 June 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Topic: Half-Life Joint Posted: 06 June 2006 at 8:47pm
	It's not really meant to have alot of stuff in it, but, mostly, if you've played Half-Life, the rooms in the game are destroyed mostly and you can crawl through air vents. The guy that is dead there has chains holding him up, if you wondered. C&C would be very helpful, as this is my first one ever.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 06 June 2006 at 10:08pm
	Looks great and great subject. I would deepen the floor color a little bit cuz its too contrasted with the walls. Also the left wall needs to be a shade lighter than the right wall to follow the upper right lightsource used in the Joint. The dark grey line where the walls meet is not needed. I would also recolor the black line where the floor meets the wall with the dark grey. The fellows legs seem chopped to oddly try a rounded line to show depth and bring in some of the lighter red to make the blood shiny. The same goes for the water on the floor. EDIT: typos Edited by jalonso
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Hossier Seaman Joined: 06 June 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Posted: 06 June 2006 at 10:25pm
	I'll work on that tomorrow, also thanks for the good C&C
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Blueberry_pie Rear Admiral Joined: 24 July 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2176	Posted: 07 June 2006 at 2:26am
	Add some of the Half-Life enemies! Some headcrabs or zombies would be nice :)
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 07 June 2006 at 8:41am
	Nice. Could always do a scene form one of the games.

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Hossier Seaman Joined: 06 June 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Posted: 07 June 2006 at 10:39am
	I will be adding Gordon Freeman, I jsut didn't know what else to add, so, I didn't want to put him in. I also had the G-Man in a window on the right wall, but, took him out becase the window was horrible. I'll be adding some headcrabs or zombies. Thanks for the comments.
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Hossier Seaman Joined: 06 June 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Posted: 08 June 2006 at 11:21am
	I'm pretty sure I did this wrong, but I updated it, took what you guys said, and I hope I did it right, well, here it is, I've added a Zombie and Gordon Freeman: C&C?
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Blueberry_pie Rear Admiral Joined: 24 July 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2176	Posted: 08 June 2006 at 11:34am
	Nice. I think some more contrast on the shading would be better... the orange parts of Gordon's HEV suit in particular. Right now the air vent looks a little strange... is it supposed to be an open or closed one? If it's supposed to be closed, I think you should make it look more like this. For an open one, you should add depth, so it doesn't just look like a darker coloured sqaure pasted on the wall. Good luck :)
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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 08 June 2006 at 11:40am
	Yeah the floor is far too bright for the rest of the piece so far, and i think the water looks out of perspective. Perhaps also bring the saturation of the orange down a bit. ~

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Souly Commander Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451	Posted: 08 June 2006 at 1:04pm
	No weapons?
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Hossier Seaman Joined: 06 June 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 5	Posted: 08 June 2006 at 6:38pm
	Thanks for the comments. The vent is open, but I'll add alittle more to it. Yeah, now that I look at it, Gordon's suit is somewhat bright, and I think I did forget to shade it. The floor's too bright? Well, I kinda just played Half Life, and took the floor colors compared to the walls, and the walls are cement-ish, while the floors are tile, so, if you think I should, I'll make the tiles darker. :) Weapons so soon? I'll see if I can even make them. I'll maybe add a crowbar on the floor.
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 08 June 2006 at 9:16pm
	It will make things look better if the floor was a light grey thats almost white but not true white, ya know?.....
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 09 June 2006 at 9:39am
	Gorden has no glasses

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HesterInimical Seaman Joined: 28 June 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 9	Posted: 28 June 2006 at 7:45am
	I think it's pretty amazing... I love it :D Love the theme... it's sort is a bit liek int he game...
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 01 July 2006 at 11:44am
	Yes Hossier.. Update! I would suggest adding some texture to the walls, firstly.

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Colbert Nation Seaman Joined: 03 August 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 26	Posted: 04 August 2006 at 5:00pm
	Lol, awesome. I love the zombie with the head crab!
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Souly Commander Joined: 13 December 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2451	Posted: 04 August 2006 at 6:15pm
	*Originally posted by HesterInimical* I think it's pretty amazing... I love it :D Love the theme... it's sort is a bit liek int he game... Are you serious?
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