Pixel Joint Forum: Bread Roll

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   Could you criticize the living sh*t out of this piece please?

Thanks please.

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Zizka Commander Joined: 07 May 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 139	Topic: Bread Roll Posted: 19 November 2015 at 1:00pm
	Could you criticize the living sh*t out of this piece please? Thanks please.
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eishiya Commander Joined: 04 August 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1104	Posted: 19 November 2015 at 1:34pm
	I don't know what I'm looking at, but it's cute and the animation's very smooth. The number of times it spins is too much for the distance it moves. I don't like how square the eyes are compared to how round everything else is. If your palette has the room, adding another colour to smooth out the corners would help, I think.
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Lindion45 Midshipman Joined: 03 June 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 35	Posted: 20 November 2015 at 5:46am
	It's awesome! But I don't like how the whites of his eyes just completely disappear, but that seems to be a recurring theme in your work, so I doubt you'll be changing it xD
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Zizka Commander Joined: 07 May 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 139	Posted: 20 November 2015 at 8:27am
	@eishiya: It's a slice of bread, silly :D. Ok for the eyes and the rolling motion, easy to fix. @Lindion45: Yah! Way too late to change that :D.
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eishiya Commander Joined: 04 August 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1104	Posted: 20 November 2015 at 8:39am
	It's a very long slice of bread xP Must've been a very tall loaf.
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Zizka Commander Joined: 07 May 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 139	Posted: 20 November 2015 at 8:48am
	All bread is born equal, some bread is just longer than others. -Zizka, 2015
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drain Commander Joined: 09 June 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 95	Posted: 28 November 2015 at 8:19pm
	I'm not keen into animating, but to me it looks as if it turns slightly to the left when it rolls, as it just turns into a circle, and for the distance he covers, the amount of rolls seem to be too much.
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Zizka Commander Joined: 07 May 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 139	Posted: 28 December 2015 at 5:51am
	Final version folks:
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eishiya Commander Joined: 04 August 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1104	Posted: 28 December 2015 at 8:32am
	I know you said "final", but I'm curious: maybe the eye motion might read fine without suddenly adding white parts to the eyes? I don't think you need the white since your goal is just to show the eyes spinning. The contrast between the bread and white is low enough that it doesn't make a big functional difference, and just adds a weird detail.
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Zizka Commander Joined: 07 May 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 139	Posted: 29 December 2015 at 8:29am
	Yup! Good point. The reason why I added it is because it's part of the ''style'' of the whole game, where you go from white to no white etc... I forgot to add you in the credit in the gallery. Sorry about that! Will do so right away!
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eishiya Commander Joined: 04 August 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1104	Posted: 29 December 2015 at 9:37am
	Credit? In what gallery? I didn't do anything!
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