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EXmaster
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Quote EXmaster Replybullet Topic: looking for critique.
    Posted: 25 February 2016 at 4:12pm
exactly what it says on the can. im new to this pixel art stuff and i want to get as much constructive criticism of my work as possible. i don't have manny people around me that both know how to sprite/or are critical to point out errors or offer advice so be as harsh as possible! please and thank you.

i have been spriteing for about 6 months so im still fairly new to all of this jazz

first up is some wips: i was asked to mimmic the maple story style but maple story sprites are hella garbo so i fussed with it a ton until i got something i liked.




here i was trying to develop my own style to use for a larger project later on. most of these are super wip feel free to rip them to shreds.








after taking some time doing other things i went back and reflected on one of my first attempts. does it look like a solid improvement?

<new on the right and old on the left>

thanks for reading i look forward to your responses. please be as critical and honest as possible.
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Quote RebeaLeion Replybullet Posted: 27 February 2016 at 11:24pm

on the first big character with big head, I would try to do something with head as it has very static feel.
Hopping girl with brown hair in orane jacket looks awesome, anim is very fluent too.

THe walking one (with shadow/silver hair) not so much. anim of walk is quite nice, but face seems a bit flat. (maybe hat does that).

from the last, girl with blue hairs I like the new one too /on the left. I like your pixelart its really nice.
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