Hello everyone, I hope you are doing well.

As you old timers know, I've been working on a game for a while now.

I want to have the origins of Pan, the main character in the game. So I decided to give him a human shape, showing how he looked before he was mutated to a slice of Bread trapped in a Toaster.



So basically, I'd like to keep sort of a cartoon look (which is why the guy is barely taller than the toaster) but I still want to look it like a human.

If it's too hard to give criticism based on this, I'll refine the character to make it look more realistic in order to get criticism.

So basically, if you could tell me everything wrong with the character on the left, no bar holds, I'd appreciate it.

Thank you!

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