So quick question. I'm preparing for my KickStarter and I want to have this update system where Pan has different expressions depending on the amount reached so far in the KS. I've just begun this morning:



Basically, I'm looking for ideas of other ''states''. The ''tiers'' are the following (each tier being revealed as the amounts are reached):

1,000 - Ok
2,000 - Ok
4,000 - ?
6,000 - ?
8,000 - ?
10,000 -?
12,000 -?
15,000 -?

So I'm basically looking for 6 other things. I'm thinking of Pan in a spa with some ''bread women'', Pan driving a luxury car... but I don't have a lot of ideas besides that. I thought I'd brainstorm with you guys.

I'm also looking for the most nitpicky of criticism about the characters themselves.

Also, how could I make the bricks of cash look less like bricks and more like stacks of cash? I've tried different things for more than one hour but couldn't get to anything conclusive.

Thank you for reading and commenting should you decide to do so.

Perhaps a blanket, a room in a run-down motel, the inside of a car, a tiny apartment, a house , and a fancy house.

They're looking pretty nice, but I'm concerned how well it "sells" your game. Your entire Kickstarter page should be about enticing people to support your game and showing them how awesome of a concept it is, even the parts that aren't explicitly about your game, such as this stretch goal meter.

Aside from "there is pixel art" and "Pan is the main character", it doesn't tell the reader anything about the game. Moreover, it seems so far off-theme that it might give the reader a false impression of the game, even if combined with accurate information elsewhere on the page.

What marks progression within the game itself? Use that to guide your stretch goal art. If that isn't appropriate, then at least do something that's on-theme, like using different quality levels of foods (e.g. from really simple fried eggs to a 5-star dessert with all the useless frills).

I know, but like I said in my previous post, your entire page should be on-theme and helping to inform the player about your game. It's about building a cohesive image of the game subconsciously. Off-theme graphics distort and muddy the potential buyer's impression of the game, even if your preceding description is carefully-crafted.