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Rodder
Commander ![]() infinite cool points Joined: 15 December 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 162 |
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With the upcoming holiday, I just really wanted to do this. Most of the scene is just copy/pasted. Im not sure what im going to do with it, but whatever I do it needs to be fairly simple to keep the file size down. How does the fireworks look? Im sure I could do better, but its a massive amount of work so id be happy with convincing. Also I don't have to animate this, I could just merge a couple frames for a good action shot. Edited by Rodder |
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DuPz0r
Seaman ![]() Joined: 01 February 2006 Location: United Kingdom Online Status: Offline Posts: 31 |
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Wow, nice smooth looking animation.
Maybe you could add more brighter light when the fireworks flash, and that would look great. Edited by DuPz0r |
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Psychotic_Carp
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Nice work but the explosions should last a bit longer
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Skull
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Wow, when it get's running it looks great.
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BlackFang
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just agree with Psychotic_Carp |
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Aleiav
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The fireworks look amazing. I think you've done an excellent job. :) But in your spare time, I would put a little more detail on the ground below. Maybe some dirt texture?
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Larwick
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Lol, he's standing waaay too close to be a good example to the kids.
Nice stuff, i agree with what the other people are saying. I also think the proportions for things seem a tad out. But getting them right for the firework hieght and explosion breadth would need a stupidly large canvas, so theres not much need to change that. |
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jalonso
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ditto, Lar
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Rodder
Commander ![]() infinite cool points Joined: 15 December 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 162 |
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I wish I could have posted this sooner. My internet was down and I used that time to redraw the animation, rather than lengthen it.
It's much slower/detailed this time around. I also used a more realistic palette, and extended the canvas so it breaks higher. It's just a single burst for right now. I'll focus on the ground next. ![]() |
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Larwick
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Nice. I think it should continue to rise as it bursts, as now it seems to stop in midair to burst, which looks odd.
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Aleiav
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Some of the pieces of the fireworks should fall a little faster. You know how firework pieces burst out and than fall but it's still light so it looks like falling shooting star, for lack of a better description. Sorta like that.
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Rodder
Commander ![]() infinite cool points Joined: 15 December 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 162 |
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Small update :
The initial explosions have been removed, it rises some after it bursts, and ive added a glow in the first couple frames of the burst. I havent changed the falling effect yet though. ![]() |
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Ensellitis
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that explosion is looking really sexy
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There's a pubic hair on my keyboard. What the f**k?? I "mow the lawn" so it's not mine. Gross. |
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Aleiav
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Coming along nicely! *thumbs up*
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