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   My apartment is too big to submit! how do you submit it? 

Heres the pic!

Edited by wertler - 12 July 2006 at 5:51am

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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Topic: My apartment Posted: 12 July 2006 at 1:44am
	My apartment is too big to submit! how do you submit it? Heres the pic! Edited by wertler - 12 July 2006 at 5:51am
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 12 July 2006 at 3:32am
	Firstly, the background is black, and really should be transparent. Second.. what is going on? Looks like a rather simple edit.

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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 12 July 2006 at 5:28am
	He saw himself and his sister is confused
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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 12 July 2006 at 7:23am
	Needs plenty more work wertler, even if you do submit it i doubt it'll be accepted. You've used the template for the room, and the template for the people, with not much editing, and class it as your own. You really need to spend more time on it, making it original and interesting, and perhaps more obvious to what is going on.

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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 12 July 2006 at 9:20am
	OK. Any ideas? here's an update!
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jalonso Admiral Joined: 29 November 2022 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13537	Posted: 12 July 2006 at 10:34am
	maybe you can re-work the walls to be original. Not just color wise. maybe a plant or two. Different clothing on the non-clone character. A floor rug. Know what I mean. Don't give up.
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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 12 July 2006 at 11:18am
	Update! could someone please make some shrubery for me. I'm not very good. Edited by wertler - 12 July 2006 at 11:20am
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Monkey 'o Doom Commander Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994	Posted: 12 July 2006 at 11:26am
	"A SHRUBBERY!!!" lol. The point of the forum isn't really to do what you can't, rather, it's to improve what you can and ultimately enable you to do more.
	RPG is numberwang.
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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 12 July 2006 at 11:48am
	well is there a tutorial on how to make "A SHRUBBERY"
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Monkey 'o Doom Commander Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994	Posted: 12 July 2006 at 1:41pm
	The subtle message of my previous post read as follows: "SHOW US WHAT YA HAVE AND LET US TELL YA HOW TO FIX THE DANG THING!" Thank you for your time and the toll this surely took on your legally favorable mental state.
	RPG is numberwang.
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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 12 July 2006 at 2:40pm
	I'm only starting at pixel work but I'll give it a try! I know I'm crap. I cant even draw 3d stuff! Edited by wertler - 12 July 2006 at 2:40pm
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Skull Commander PJ Pioneer Joined: 03 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1521	Posted: 13 July 2006 at 1:24am
	It's called, in this case, isometric. And for the record, that's nothing like a shubbery.

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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 13 July 2006 at 10:55am
	practice, practice, practice my friend. and patience young padawan, you too can be a jedi. :P Your apartment isn't bad, but all that's in it is a couple of people and some plants. Maybe add some stuff? Like some chairs or something? If he's cloned himself, you could make a mad scientist table with a bunch of potions!
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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 13 July 2006 at 1:07pm
	If he cloned himself he wouldn't say "Your me!" now would he? But still I'll try. Edited by wertler - 13 July 2006 at 1:07pm
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pixelblink Commander Joined: 19 February 2023 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2865	Posted: 13 July 2006 at 1:13pm
	no.. he'd say "you're me!" as in "you are" as not in "your" as in the possessive form of saying something like "this is your balcony thread which will be closed soon if you don't begin trying to learn from your peers and update accordingly. It is my authority to do so if I don't see progress or if you continue to revive dead threads in the name of boredom" see how it works? Edited by pixelblink - 13 July 2006 at 1:13pm
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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 13 July 2006 at 2:35pm
	Here's an update and btw I always get confused with shrubberys. are they bushes Edited by wertler - 14 July 2006 at 11:24am
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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 11:29am
	Are you allowed to double post? well if you aren't I didn't know. Anyway do you like this better. she has a pink dress and there is a rug but no poster. C&C Edited by wertler - 14 July 2006 at 11:46am
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Monkey 'o Doom Commander Joined: 24 September 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2994	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 11:40am
	where is it
	RPG is numberwang.
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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 11:47am
	there
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 12:40pm
	The rug isn't on iso perspective at all. You need a tutorial on isometrics. I'd suggest this one here.
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alkaline Commander Joined: 25 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 868	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 12:44pm
	What did you do to your image quality? Anyways yes everything needs to be isometric, I would also suggest using less saturated colors and put in more detail.
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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 14 July 2006 at 1:15pm
	wat about the other update? recognise the poster?
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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 20 July 2006 at 11:23am
	someone pleas say sumthing!!!!
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Blueberry_pie Rear Admiral Joined: 24 July 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2176	Posted: 20 July 2006 at 11:56am
	What's there left to say at the moment? I'd suggest you first do something with the crits you already got.
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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 20 July 2006 at 12:38pm
	k ill try that
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mike2590 Seaman Joined: 13 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 12	Posted: 21 July 2006 at 1:00am
	you should try to turn the "sister so that she is looking at her brother(s). this should be difficult, but you will get it.
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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 21 July 2006 at 12:54pm
	Ìm probabley not gonna update for a while so ill ask again. in my update does any1 recignise the poster?
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Aleiav Commander Joined: 08 April 2016 Online Status: Offline Posts: 2380	Posted: 21 July 2006 at 10:58pm
	no one probably does. I don't see what difference it makes if someone does recognize it. Even if someone does recognize it, it doesn't make your piece any better. I'd work on the critiques and stop worrying about things like that.
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Dra_chan Commander Joined: 20 February 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 628	Posted: 24 July 2006 at 1:27pm
	*Originally posted by wertler* Are you allowed to double post? well if you aren't I didn't know. Anyway do you like this better. she has a pink dress and there is a rug but no poster. C&C The carpet should follow the floor's direction in the lines, otherwise it looks like it's floating.
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wertler Seaman Joined: 09 July 2006 Online Status: Offline Posts: 32	Posted: 25 July 2006 at 3:51am
	oh sorry!
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Larwick Commander Joined: 18 July 2024 Online Status: Offline Posts: 4015	Posted: 25 July 2006 at 4:56am
	*Originally posted by wertler* oh sorry! Lol, there's no need to say sorry. You should thank them for pointing it out to you and get to work on fixing it.

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