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Akira
Commander
Joined: 03 March 2005 Location: New Zealand Online Status: Offline Posts: 220 |
![]() Topic: lurkin in tha floor wip.Posted: 22 May 2005 at 2:22am |
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Heres what i got so far.
Meh, I'm bored now. Might do some more later. C&C if you please. |
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sedgemonkey
Admiral
Joined: 07 April 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 1669 |
![]() Posted: 22 May 2005 at 2:35am |
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Good start and I dig the idea (glowing eyes down below and the blood splatter on the wall look great). It might be nice to have some other body parts or other victims strewn about. Why are there so many vertical lines of blood? |
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DrunkyDuck
Midshipman
Joined: 25 April 2005 Online Status: Offline Posts: 46 |
![]() Posted: 22 May 2005 at 2:37am |
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I like this already. Great work on the floor grates.
The dead body looks kind of weird with it's hands being so close to it, I suggest bending them in the elbows or in the shoulders to make it look like he was dragged or thrown around the room. |
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Reaching out to embrace the random.
Reaching out to embrace whatever may come. I embrace my desire to swing on the spiral of our divinity and still be a human. |
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Akira
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Joined: 03 March 2005 Location: New Zealand Online Status: Offline Posts: 220 |
![]() Posted: 23 May 2005 at 2:26am |
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the vertical lines are meant to be the blood running down the sides of the grill. I don't think i pulled that off too well. I think i shall remove one arm or the other and toss it around the room somewhere. Perhaps mangle the corpse some more too. |
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