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Biokiwi
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Quote Biokiwi Replybullet Topic: please help me strartup with pixel art!
    Posted: 12 April 2018 at 10:38am
i am a young game developer, and as you probably know i need to know at least the basics of pixel art. I hope thats why you are here!

i would like you to give feedback to the following pixel art!





Thank you for you feedback (and sorry for my bad english)


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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 13 April 2018 at 12:24pm
Hi Biokiwi, could you embed the pictures in your post in the future as explained here? I just did it for you now :)

For the line art on the character, I suggest you try to clean it up a bit. See this mini guide:

Also his left shoulder (our right) seems a bit low and wide.

Where is the light coming from and how should that affect his jumper?
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Quote GoodyPundit Replybullet Posted: 18 April 2018 at 7:43am
What Hapiel said is super right,
that's the basic that pixel artist need ;)

You shown a good start Biokiwi!
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