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   So here's my current WIP. I cleaned up everything and worked on the dude. What do you think where I can improve on? Outline on the dude goor or bad? Please let me know :D I'll give it another pass later ^^

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Doomhanger Midshipman Joined: 29 April 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14	Posted: 04 June 2019 at 2:00am
	So here's my current WIP. I cleaned up everything and worked on the dude. What do you think where I can improve on? Outline on the dude goor or bad? Please let me know :D I'll give it another pass later ^^
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Kaishido Midshipman Joined: 17 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 29	Posted: 04 June 2019 at 8:37am
	A rough WIP of what I want to do... Some alien eggs on a field. Will certainly evolve into something better. EDIT: Refined a little bit with additional details. EDIT 2: More stuff
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SoloSalsero Midshipman Joined: 26 May 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 12	Posted: 04 June 2019 at 12:53pm
	Hi guys. Question: There is chance to upload the WIP on thursday? I'm running with work and study stuff :/
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Irenaart Rear Admiral Joined: 05 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 375	Posted: 05 June 2019 at 2:02am
	*Originally posted by SoloSalsero* Hi guys. Question: There is chance to upload the WIP on thursday? I'm running with work and study stuff :/ No, it's not a problem. Upload it whenever you can...
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Gecimen Admiral Joined: 16 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263	Posted: 05 June 2019 at 4:05pm
	@Doomhanger; looks very good. The outline, while totally your choice, looks good to me in terms of readability. IMO you can call this finished whenever you want.
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Doomhanger Midshipman Joined: 29 April 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14	Posted: 06 June 2019 at 8:42am
	So, I played a bit with the outline and did a cleanup. I'd call this done ^^ Unless you guys want to point something out! Then please don't hold back! @Gecimen How do I deliver the final file? Just in case, here is the download :D P.S. I made the file indexed and the border transparent. Transparency is not in the spec, but I didn't use transparency in the actual tile of course. If something is not right, please tell me! I just want to make your life as easy as possible :D P.S.S. Can we share this and upload it to PJ? Or is this all going to be shared in one big call when everything is done?
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SpeedyCube Commander Joined: 15 February 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 117	Posted: 06 June 2019 at 8:05pm
	Hesitated to reserve a tile because I never finish them but eh @Doomhanger I think it was unintentional but the stuff in your tile is oriented it looked a lot like it could be on a sphere. So here's this WIP. Obviously people multiple tiles away don't have to accommodate at all if they don't want to, interpret as you like. But let me know if this breaks any iso perspective rules
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Doomhanger Midshipman Joined: 29 April 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 14	Posted: 06 June 2019 at 11:23pm
	@SpeedyCube The Sphere idea is interesting ^^
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Gecimen Admiral Joined: 16 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263	Posted: 07 June 2019 at 12:55am
	@Speedycube, it would be better if you don't cut the tile below the tile's original size. The borders are where people can draw big & interesting ideas. You don't have to change anything you drew but perhaps extend background or foreground items, like the one you have on the left (actually that might be also good for cutting the sphere idea, which might require 9 tiles unless cut somewhere :) )
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Minord Midshipman Joined: 02 June 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33	Posted: 07 June 2019 at 8:31am
	I think, i can considering it done.
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Kaishido Midshipman Joined: 17 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 29	Posted: 07 June 2019 at 8:41am
	Ok, I've started putting more texture on my walls, but I feel like they would look a bit noisy... thoughts? Any criticism is greatly appreciated!
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SpeedyCube Commander Joined: 15 February 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 117	Posted: 07 June 2019 at 1:29pm
	@Gecimen actually a few more than 9... Don't worry btw, the "big and interesting" is on its way ;) Here's the guide I used that might be helpful if more distant tiles choose to continue this as a sphere but draw whatever you guys want!!
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Gecimen Admiral Joined: 16 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263	Posted: 07 June 2019 at 2:23pm
	@Speedycube; Haha that would be a good idea only if it was something like a smaller floating sattelite or something. Also Minord already completed 34. Hmm that gives me an idea. Wanna go for something in the middle? Give me 5 minutes. Edit: If you'd like to do something here and about this size instead, I think it would be more realistic. And I would also draw a tile. It would be like a floating satellite. @Minord; that is a very good looking tile! @Kaishido; if you'd like an example for an alien queen hatching room, check out this previous collab, you'll see a similar room on the right block.
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Talbone Midshipman Joined: 03 June 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 11	Posted: 07 June 2019 at 7:06pm
	update!
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darchangel Commander Joined: 18 November 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 182	Posted: 07 June 2019 at 9:33pm
	If this isn't too large, I think it's done.
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Gecimen Admiral Joined: 16 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263	Posted: 08 June 2019 at 4:31am
	@Darchangel; this is plain awesome. @Talbone; going good!
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Minord Midshipman Joined: 02 June 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 33	Posted: 08 June 2019 at 8:21am
	Hey i can get the 84 Tile
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Irenaart Rear Admiral Joined: 05 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 375	Posted: 08 June 2019 at 10:39am
	@Minord; sure you can!
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CuriousBeefJerky Commander Joined: 23 April 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 132	Posted: 09 June 2019 at 8:58am
	Hi again for another collab! 41 please? WIP
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Irenaart Rear Admiral Joined: 05 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 375	Posted: 09 June 2019 at 10:39am
	@CuriousBeefJerky; #41 is yours!
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0xDB Commander Joined: 18 July 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 209	Posted: 10 June 2019 at 1:16am
	I'd like to reserve tile #42 please.
	0xDB \| twitter
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Gecimen Admiral Joined: 16 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263	Posted: 10 June 2019 at 3:02am
	Sure!
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0xDB Commander Joined: 18 July 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 209	Posted: 10 June 2019 at 7:04am
	#42 done:
	0xDB \| twitter
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JerryPie Rear Admiral Joined: 19 September 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 228	Posted: 10 June 2019 at 10:27am
	@speedycube: I like the idea of the sphere structure, but agree with Gecimen about the size. @Darchangel: Very cool, this reminds me of Dr. Seuss a little bit. @0xDB Wow those crystals look great! Maybe some tiny shadows on your finer details so they aren't lost in the scale of the collab. It took me a while to notice the skull. Tiny dark outlines could help it stand out. I'm kind of a sucker for dark outlines though, so I might have gone a little heavy. -- Overall your tile looks great though!
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Eggy Commander Joined: 01 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 271	Posted: 10 June 2019 at 1:06pm
	Okay so here's my next WIP. Fleshed out Marvin and the environment a little bit but the latter is far from done. Any suggestions on what I could put in content-wise? The tile's feeling a little empty (e.g. Marvin has nothing/nobody to interact with, the ground is plain) and I'm still dry on ideas :(
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prowler Midshipman Joined: 19 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 15	Posted: 10 June 2019 at 1:48pm
	I'd love to join! I can take any random number :-)
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JerryPie Rear Admiral Joined: 19 September 2018 Online Status: Offline Posts: 228	Posted: 10 June 2019 at 2:07pm
	*Originally posted by Eggy* Any suggestions on what I could put in content-wise? The tile's feeling a little empty (e.g. Marvin has nothing/nobody to interact with, the ground is plain) and I'm still dry on ideas :( The telescope was always something he was looking through, or some other electronic equipment. https://artinsights.com/wp-content/uploads/2017/12/Beware-the-eyes-of-Mars-Chuck-Jones-Marvin-Martian-sericel.png Also there are some other characters he use to run around with. The green dog, green bird, big furry red guy.
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CuriousBeefJerky Commander Joined: 23 April 2015 Online Status: Offline Posts: 132	Posted: 10 June 2019 at 7:01pm
	Done with 41. I'll be back for another once some more are done.
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Kaishido Midshipman Joined: 17 August 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 29	Posted: 10 June 2019 at 9:41pm
	@Gecimen: I'll take a look at it, thanks!
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prowler Midshipman Joined: 19 August 2019 Online Status: Offline Posts: 15	Posted: 10 June 2019 at 11:37pm
	Please reserve number 21!
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Oke Midshipman Joined: 25 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 43	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 2:57am
	I will take 32
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Irenaart Rear Admiral Joined: 05 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 375	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 3:31am
	@prowler; #21 is yours! @Oke; you can only choose the tile that borders the finished tile, with edge of course.
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Gecimen Admiral Joined: 16 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 3:38am
	*Originally posted by Oke* I will take 32 The available tiles are: 6, 20, 26, 33, 48, 49, 76, 92.
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Irenaart Rear Admiral Joined: 05 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 375	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 4:16am
	Ahh, not #84. It's Minord's tile. But 76 and 92 are available also... And #21 is reserved as well. I gave it to prowler.
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Gecimen Admiral Joined: 16 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 5:01am
	Thanks! Edited. (actually you can edit too )
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Oke Midshipman Joined: 25 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 43	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 5:09am
	*Originally posted by Gecimen* *Originally posted by Oke* I will take 32 sorry, 35, please.
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darchangel Commander Joined: 18 November 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 182	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 5:09am
	I'll take 27 please
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Irenaart Rear Admiral Joined: 05 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 375	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 5:32am
	@Oke, @darchangel; no problem, guys! The tiles are yours! You are neighbors now.. @Gecimen; you are right, I can! (but didn't want to mess with your messages).
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Gecimen Admiral Joined: 16 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 6:18am
	@everyone; we had a really great start! All tiles so far seem really good. kutgw!
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yellowbouncyball Midshipman Joined: 13 March 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 12:27pm
	are there any open spots in this one? Can I join in? Id like #50, looks like its available
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Irenaart Rear Admiral Joined: 05 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 375	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 1:50pm
	@yellowbouncyball; sure you can! #50 is yours. Enjoy!
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yellowbouncyball Midshipman Joined: 13 March 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 2:10pm
	*Originally posted by Kaishido* @Kaishido wondering why your workspace is more hexagonal than the diamond shape- trying to plan mine out with the current progress you have but not sure how its going to fit together can you help me out :D
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SoloSalsero Midshipman Joined: 26 May 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 12	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 5:39pm
	Hi. Sorry for the delay but I have had very busy days. Here is my first WIP and corresponds to the classic scene of an alien capturing a cow mounted on his UFO but in reverse.
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Gecimen Admiral Joined: 16 February 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 3263	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 6:53pm
	*Originally posted by yellowbouncyball* *Originally posted by Kaishido* @Kaishido wondering why your workspace is more hexagonal than the diamond shape- trying to plan mine out with the current progress you have but not sure how its going to fit together can you help me out :D perhaps you can go for another tile until kaishido makes up his mind.
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yellowbouncyball Midshipman Joined: 13 March 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 9:55pm
	good idea- Can I switch for 92 Please?
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Irenaart Rear Admiral Joined: 05 October 2020 Online Status: Offline Posts: 375	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 11:57pm
	@yellowbouncyball; #92 is yours!
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yellowbouncyball Midshipman Joined: 13 March 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 11 June 2019 at 11:59pm
	a little progress any advice and/or criticism is greatly appreciated this is pretty rough just "doodling"
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Reo Rear Admiral Joined: 07 February 2021 Online Status: Offline Posts: 549	Posted: 12 June 2019 at 3:33am
	Whoops! Sorry been very busy moving house, so thanks for the reminder Geci! This collab seem to be going very well so far!Will finish this in the coming days.
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darchangel Commander Joined: 18 November 2014 Online Status: Offline Posts: 182	Posted: 12 June 2019 at 6:49am
	I think this is done (27):
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yellowbouncyball Midshipman Joined: 13 March 2017 Online Status: Offline Posts: 13	Posted: 12 June 2019 at 11:51am
	im calling mine done unless anybody sees anything wrong with it that needs editing-
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