WIP (Work In Progress)
 Pixel Joint Forum : Pixel Art : WIP (Work In Progress)
Message Icon Topic: Does this style fit? Post Reply Post New Topic
Author Message
Anxious Avocado
Seaman
Seaman


Joined: 09 September 2020
Online Status: Offline
Posts: 2
Quote Anxious Avocado Replybullet Topic: Does this style fit?
    Posted: 10 September 2020 at 6:57pm


I'm prototyping an RPG and wondering if the style of this sprite with the outlines fits in with the background or do you think maybe all colliding objects could do with an outline?

Thanks!
IP IP Logged
AshCrimson
Commander
Commander
Avatar

Joined: 24 April 2020
Online Status: Offline
Posts: 606
Quote AshCrimson Replybullet Posted: 11 September 2020 at 5:46am
It's okay, though there is some pillow shading on the clothing (particularly the legs)

A bit of an aside, the grass could do with a palette that has some more contrast, it's a bit dull atm.
IP IP Logged
Sjpixels
Seaman
Seaman
Avatar

Joined: 02 September 2020
Online Status: Offline
Posts: 8
Quote Sjpixels Replybullet Posted: 11 September 2020 at 10:29am
Like Ash said, the pants have pillow shading. I also think it looks like he is looking up at the camera instead of forward like he should be. Finally, I think you can use fewer colors and a bit more saturation. Here are my changes to the character:

IP IP Logged
Anxious Avocado
Seaman
Seaman


Joined: 09 September 2020
Online Status: Offline
Posts: 2
Quote Anxious Avocado Replybullet Posted: 11 September 2020 at 1:07pm
hey thanks for the replies really appreciate the advice on the palette I do agree it is dull and Sjpixels I like what you have done with the character I will probably lean a lot more into that
IP IP Logged
Post Reply Post New Topic
Printable version Printable version

Forum Jump
You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot create polls in this forum
You cannot vote in polls in this forum