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Quote travisjjames77 Replybullet Topic: [WIP] "Camp/Rest Scene"
    Posted: 30 September 2020 at 5:51am
Here is a camp scene for a fantasy game I've been working on. The fire would be animated and placed on this image which is why it's not shown.

Any critiques, suggestions?


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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 30 September 2020 at 6:25am
Nice work!

Since the fire is so low, the shadow of the rock would cast quite high behind it. And on the things that are in front of the fire, we would normally only see a rim light, not a light that curls over, such as on the bushes!

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Quote travisjjames77 Replybullet Posted: 30 September 2020 at 6:52am
Thanks! I'll make those adjustments! Good suggestions.
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