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    Posted: 30 November 2020 at 6:19pm


First look at my colorful wizards entry! What do you think so far? The biggest area I think needs work is the magical bird. Trying to make it work, but just seems a little off. Maybe I just need to scrap this bird and and create a new bird, or drop the bird all together? I don't know, tell me what you think!
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Quote dice099 Replybullet Posted: 30 November 2020 at 6:56pm


Updated the wing and a few little things, which I think looks better! Still not quite there yet though
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 01 December 2020 at 2:04am
I think the bird is pretty nice!

The hat is nearly invisible on the background, maybe you can use some more of the red or the grey to make it stand out better?


Also his moustache is strangely straight!
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Quote dice099 Replybullet Posted: 01 December 2020 at 9:37am


Thanks for the feedback mate! I did a pretty big reworking of the face/beard as well as added some dithering
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