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Rikas
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Quote Rikas Replybullet Topic: WIP: soccer player
    Posted: 11 March 2021 at 3:51am
Hi all,

Long time I don't post here. I'm working on a game where I have these soccer players. I know the proportions are wrong, but that's a stylistic choice, same with the black outlines.



I have been working on shading this for quite a while now and I still think it looks off... any suggestions?

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Quote Maye Replybullet Posted: 11 March 2021 at 10:14am
Maybe try eyelash more bigger,more muscle on arms, eyes with more pixel high.
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Quote Greycloak Replybullet Posted: 24 March 2021 at 9:39pm
I think it looks pretty good. The only thing I might suggest would be making the wrists bend a bit, having them straight against the waist looks a bit unnatural. If you try making that pose yourself you might see what I mean.
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Quote IcePhysics Replybullet Posted: 02 April 2021 at 7:56pm
I think his breasts could be a bit rounder to be more realistic, unless a blocky look is a part of the style you mentioned. I would also add shadow beneath his hair. Especially under the part where it sticks out, but also perhaps even under the other parts of the hair too since the hair could cast shade there too. Oh, and maybe the shadow going across his beard on the right side of his face should be a bit darker.
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