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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 01 April 2022 at 5:54am
Looks similar to me, buıt the waterfall can use a little bit more work.
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Quote vrine Replybullet Posted: 04 April 2022 at 8:36pm


Quick update to show I'm not dead!
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 05 April 2022 at 1:45am
Thanks Vrine!
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 07 April 2022 at 5:08am


Not sure who I should put in the boat.
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 07 April 2022 at 5:43am


Here it is. Unless you think something is wrong, I'll call this piece done and move on to #23
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Quote gawrone Replybullet Posted: 07 April 2022 at 7:24am
I like it. I installed it. It's great. You can move to another now
But you cannot take #23 becasue it is reserved by Gecimen.
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 07 April 2022 at 9:47am
Looks cool Nightmare :) As Gawrone said it's mine but if you have a good idea for it I'll drop it for you.
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 07 April 2022 at 10:03am
Originally posted by gawrone



I like it. I installed it. It's great. You can move to another now But you cannot take #23 becasue it is reserved by Gecimen.



Oh lol yeah it is reserved. In that case I'll take #83
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 07 April 2022 at 6:38pm


WIP already. I think it looks alright so far.
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Quote vrine Replybullet Posted: 07 April 2022 at 11:29pm
Looking great Nightmare!

I think the waterline is a bit high and messes with the iso perspective, but this may just be a personal feeling



I'd consider making the water line a bit more parallel with the cliff line
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 08 April 2022 at 12:27am
I wouldn't say that the cliff edge is necessarily straight down, especially considering how the rock formation comes inward on the right side. It's almost an overhang. Perhaps a shadow better helps sell that?

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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 08 April 2022 at 1:03am
It's like the river is going upwards at the moment, some more angle will help it.
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Quote vrine Replybullet Posted: 08 April 2022 at 1:39am
I understand what you're saying however changing the angle of the water isn't because the cliff is straight, its because the physics of water wouldn't allow it to look like that in an iso environment. At the moment it does not look like its hugging the cliff due to the rising angle (like Gecimen said, it looks like the river is traveling upwards).
That makes sense now if you're aiming for an overhang, however it currently doesn't read as an overhang!

If you're trying to go for the overhang look, I'd suggest trying to separate the water from the cliff more strongly. You can do this by introducing a darker shadow, and making the cliffs jagged, for example:



However you may find another way to display it, I'm interested to see how you resolve the issue!
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 08 April 2022 at 1:46am
I'm not sure what you mean. Are you referring to the waterfall on the right, or the one on the left toward the mainland?
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 08 April 2022 at 1:53am
I like that jagged look. I've introduced a shadow in my latest WIP, but I like the way you do it in yours. Mine won't be as jagged, but I'll try more jagged than what I already have

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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 08 April 2022 at 2:10am


Here's how I've implemented it ATM. It already looks a lot better to me. But perhaps the shadows should be more pronounced?

Also, how do the circles around the character look? Do they seem fine?
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Quote vrine Replybullet Posted: 08 April 2022 at 2:39am
That looks a lot better, much more readable! :)
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 08 April 2022 at 4:07am
Ah now I understand what you mean; there is a cave-ish dent in the rocks, but yes it should be way darker, not just the water but the caved rocks, too.
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 08 April 2022 at 7:39am
Tile 64 is done!
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Quote vrine Replybullet Posted: 08 April 2022 at 11:22pm
That looks great Hapiel! :D
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 09 April 2022 at 7:28am


I'd say my tile is almost done! I think I'll work on the water some more, and maybe the cliff face, but other than that it's finished. Perhaps it's in a place where it can be placed on the final image as reference for neighbors
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Quote Krugelix Replybullet Posted: 10 April 2022 at 9:12pm
I'll drop the current wip here.

I hope i'll find some more time to refine it and add a little bit.
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 11 April 2022 at 1:39am
@nightmare3711; The only thing I'd refine are the rocks on the right side, adding it as a reference as you said.

@Hapiel; is that yourself?

@Krugelix, also adding you as reference to neighbors.
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Quote Hapiel Replybullet Posted: 11 April 2022 at 1:57am
I'm leaning on the side, yes :). Is my lollipop readable?
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 11 April 2022 at 2:07am
Originally posted by Hapiel

I'm leaning on the side, yes :). Is my lollipop readable?


Now that you said it, yes :)
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 11 April 2022 at 5:47am
Wow, seeing each version of water I made together in one image is a little weird.



I did a rework of the rocks and I think it looks better.
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 11 April 2022 at 4:00pm
It really does!
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Quote vrine Replybullet Posted: 12 April 2022 at 8:39pm

62 is finished! :D
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 13 April 2022 at 7:46am
I'm going to call that done as-is and take #7. Going for one tile on each edge, and then I'll take a middle tile where I think I'll leave it off.
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 13 April 2022 at 1:48pm
Originally posted by Nightmare3711

I'm going to call that done as-is and take #7. Going for one tile on each edge, and then I'll take a middle tile where I think I'll leave it off.


You mean 6 I guess? You can't take tiles without neighbors.
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 13 April 2022 at 2:11pm
Oh that is a rule, huh? I guess I can wait because I want 7 specifically. I'll take 28 instead.
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 13 April 2022 at 4:01pm


Here you go. What do you think?
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Quote gawrone Replybullet Posted: 14 April 2022 at 1:06am
Looks great but please finish the dog's head ^^
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 14 April 2022 at 7:35am
It is incredibly awkward doing that with the space I have but I made a better attempt at the dog head.



The shadow looks wrong but there's nothing I can do about it.
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 16 April 2022 at 12:22am
If there will be no further comment then it's finished.
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 18 April 2022 at 5:49am
Looks good Nightmare :)
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Quote Umbohr Replybullet Posted: 25 April 2022 at 11:38pm
Hi there, I'd like to claim tile 95 if it's possible
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 26 April 2022 at 12:47am
Sure thing.
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 29 April 2022 at 4:41pm
Think I could get 91? I have a few interesting ideas
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Quote Umbohr Replybullet Posted: 30 April 2022 at 7:28am
tile 95 was a mistake trying to blend in with all the other tiles, i have nothing but a rough sketch that i don't think is worth to share right now. ill continue scribbling, looking for inspiration
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Quote b236 Replybullet Posted: 30 April 2022 at 3:51pm
you can do it!
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 02 May 2022 at 12:15am
@nightmare; sure!

@Umbohr; starting off with inner tiles is always better :)
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Quote Reo Replybullet Posted: 02 May 2022 at 2:11pm
Looking good guys!

Could I have 75?
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 02 May 2022 at 4:18pm
Here is the WIP I understand the proportions of the riders and the karts are all wonky, but it's meant to be that way, it's a reference to Drive Ahead https://drive-ahead.fandom.com/wiki/Go-Kart
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 03 May 2022 at 1:49am
@Reo sure!

@Nightmare: going good, please don't refrain from adding rocks or other stuff (perhaps a baloon with audience in it would be suitable to the theme) to the right side.
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Quote Umbohr Replybullet Posted: 06 May 2022 at 1:46am
Posting the rough wip to renew my deadline. i'm thinking about replacing the rail by an elevator for this part, i probably won't got that far bottom anyway, just trying to break the linear border. Not sure how to connect the two cliffs on the top side yet. I'll add animals and stuff to make it zoo like, not sure how to include the circus theme underwater otherwise.

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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 06 May 2022 at 4:08am
@Umbohr, yes making the tile that big will cause a lot of display problems with the viewers. About the theme, of course fishes and other underwater creatures are a thing. There can be underwater activities and shows as well to fit the theme.
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Quote Nightmare3711 Replybullet Posted: 06 May 2022 at 4:09am
I think tropical fish would look really great, Umbohr! Maybe even some coral or something?

I'm making a little extra progress on mine. I'll add a small crowd on that rock formation on the left cheering for the racers below, as well as some people near that whale's tail on the dock waiting to get splashed.

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Quote vrine Replybullet Posted: 08 May 2022 at 7:24pm
May I have #84?
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Quote Gecimen Replybullet Posted: 09 May 2022 at 2:25am
Sure thing!
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